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Reviews for Starting New

By : TheMysticalOne
  • From ANON - Nicholas Johnson on August 31, 2010
    While I like it I feel like it strayed to far from the facts at some point. For example, all Na'vi people know the story of Toruk Makto, it is not just the Omaticaya. Also, Mo'at has a great amount of power and no one would simply go against her wishes like that. The whole tribe wouldn't banish him like that, he had helped to save their people from total destrcution, at worst he would no longer be chief. But otherwise it is a very good story that I like very much. What I missed most was the imagery. I felt like a lot of imagery was lacking and I didn't get the experience I was hoping for after watching the movie. In the movie everything is so vivid and the Na'Vi are admittedly very attractive, yet I didn't get much of that imagery in this story and it was a bit too much for me to supply all on my own.
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  • From ANON - by_veidt on May 12, 2010
    It takes an awful lot of skill to keep me engaged in a story beyond a couple of chapters, reading every word, let alone twenty-one. Bravo. This was compelling, stylistically written, plausible, and entertaining from one chapter to the next without insisting too heavily on one thing(description, sex, etc.). The use of prior-chapter subtleties to make a point or move plot later was expertly done, and it really just thrilled me to be so into a story that I had to keep going on, all the while being entertained. I don't really know what else to say but thank you. So, thank you. And, please, keep writing.
    ~by_veidt
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  • From ANON - Jeice on April 12, 2010
    OK...I hate you in a good way, :) I started reading your story last night and ended up reading all 21 chapters. GREAT Job. I hope to read more or your work in the future. AMAZING!!! P.S Please Keep posting here, but you might also try posting on fanfiction.net net as well.
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  • From ANON - Latina Fangirl on February 14, 2010
    Aww, I'm kinda sad to see it end, but still glad that it was a happy ending.

    :-)
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  • From ANON - Vittani on February 14, 2010
    Oh I'm so sad it's over but glad it's a happy ending. Absolutely loved this story from start to finish.
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  • From ANON - Vittani on February 08, 2010
    Just saw the movie yesterday and this story was exactly what I needed to carry on living in the world. Absolutely loved it. Cant wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Klye on February 06, 2010
    Good chapter, but maybe they could go through some sort of trial to prove themselves, Not to the leader, but to his mate and the rest of them? It just seems a little strange for all of them to be so accepting so soon. Great story though! Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Latina Fangirl on February 04, 2010
    This story's very cool and there's many things I love about it.

    Keep up the great work.

    :-)
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  • From ANON - Klye on February 03, 2010
    I love this story! Keep writing! I check almost everyday for updates!
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  • From ANON - Perfection1Day on February 03, 2010
    I'm really, really enjoying this story! I do hope that you will continue it. I like Jake and Norm's relationship and i'm anxious to see if they will hear from the Omaticaya again. At least for now they've found some acceptance and happiness. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Kyle on January 23, 2010
    I love this story! Its great, and i hope you continue soon. I wish the jake/norm scenes were a little more in detail, but the rest is awesome!
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  • From hawthorne on January 21, 2010
    ooooh thought of something.... jake and norm have bigger problem than speakin English rather than Omaticayan... they have 4 fingers and a thumb...(5 toes) whereas Na’vi only have 3 fingers and thumb...(4 toes). think Han and Dierdy just might notice that...
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  • From hawthorne on January 20, 2010
    just was able to finally see avatar even tho i was syked to see it for soooo soooo long...
    didnt want to read any fanfics till i got to see the movie myself

    ok review.. interestin... good plottin and characterization... Norm is fun... he didnt get much movie time... and you made him believable...
    please keep playing up him being a scientist... he'd be driven by the biology of the planet... you got to think geeky to write him!!!

    about that... Norm I mean... i was abit shocked you just did away with Neytiri and made both norm and jake gay... even tho Im a rapid yaoi fangirl! I found the switch too sudden and slick... oh well... it wont stop me from reading...

    im interested by these two new characters... rape!!! seems like the humans may have disrupted the planet in more subtle ways than just the destruction of all that forest...

    there a possible plot bunny... think the original human base... where jake landed.. it was in the forest... the humans destroyed all that land to build... how long was it there... long time... the home tree wasnt the first and only huge disruption the planet suffered due to the humans... the ecosystem seems to be entirely interconnected with all the species... so changing moral social values could be the result

    maybe you can have Norm figure out some of this...


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  • From Dracoroxmaisox on January 18, 2010
    awwww poor babies!!!!
    stupid prejudice na'vi
    i hope they're okay, and that there wasn't poison on the dagger he used to cut the chief necklace.
    i'm glad Toruk still listens to him!
    can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - George on January 15, 2010
    OMG Cliffhanger! You cruel, cruel author. XD Don't keep me hangin!
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