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Reviews for Dreamwalker

By : mancer
  • From ANON - on July 10, 2016

    I have to say I really liked this story.. Although it was quite... weird some times, you know what i mean ;)

    Really well written, although I got confused a few times with the perspective seeminly switching characters without warning. Although Rol'ei's reaction at the end confused me a bit. Anyways, great writing, keep it up!


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  • From SinfulCreation on March 18, 2013
    I adore this story so much. The way you so clearly tell the story from both their viewpoints is marvelous. I positively can't wait for more. Please continue this story. It is something I look forward to reading again and again.
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  • From on May 14, 2011
    I wonder how Rol'eys sister will react when she learns that the lover of her brother is not only an uniltiranyu, but also a male. I assume that Rol'ey and Ted will have to return to the Omatikaya or to Hell's Gate ( where this Jason-idiot is lurking) What about if you let Jason end up in the stomach of a Thanator? I would appreciate that :-))
    The food issue isn't actually such a problem. Of all Pandorian food, humans can eat at least Episoth seeds, Hermitbud seeds and Tapirus meat ( according to Pandorapedia). So Ted's only task wouldbe simply to find a way to process them in a way that humans can eat them.
    But anyway, Ted and Rol'ey should talk with Mo'at, I think when she saw the couple she knew immediatly that they were not only teacher and apprentice..
    And, now that Neytiri is the new Olo'eyctan, will Jake become the next Tsahik?
    Please update soon.This is really an awesome story. It would be a shame to abandon it.
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  • From darkaura204 on May 07, 2011
    this story is getting interesting. update soon.
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  • From on April 16, 2011
    I love this story! With Ro'ley and Ted and their ikrans you've got really great characters and I hope you will update soon the next chapter.
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  • From hawthorne on February 14, 2011
    wow that was really interestin with the story from Starweaver's point of view... I hope he recovers
    and rol'ei and ted get together ... they need soem alone time... maybe get them both drunk and alone in a tent with guards makin sure they stay in together
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  • From SinfulCreation on December 23, 2010
    I truly adore this story. It has a whole new take on the Na'vi and Avatar relations that I greatly enjoy. I sincerely hope you will add more to this. I eagerly await more of your writing.
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  • From okamihanyu on December 16, 2010
    Ahh, great chapter. Hope things go well for chapter nine!
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  • From Kuragari75 on September 02, 2010
    ok, I tried to review but I think something went funky.... so if i end up reviewing twice i apologize! Anyway, you are a wonderful writer and I am truly enjoying all of your characters. The re-telling of Robin Hood made me giggle! Love his Ikran! Is Ted going to get one maybe? Can't wait to see where else you take this!
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  • From hawthorne on September 02, 2010
    ch 5 and 6 were even better than the first chapters! I really love that Ted and Rol'ei's relationship isnt instant or the 'oh no im not gay but I have to' its far more realistic!
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  • From Angelbratt on July 18, 2010
    update plz ^_~ this is an awesome story even tho the mains are OC's
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  • From okamihanyu on January 22, 2010
    I really like this! I mean...there isn't much out there for Avatar in terms of m/m. XD So the best any one can do is originals right? Please update soon. I want to see how Tom grows to like *forgets his name* >.< sorry... *gives cookies*
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  • From hawthorne on January 21, 2010
    wow! im in LOVE with your story! its soooooooooo delious! and your two drawings are like icing on the cake!!!
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  • From TheMysticalOne on January 13, 2010
    Wow. I really love this story. You do such a good job of explaining all of the little details. They're such a sweet couple too! Oh and the drawings you've made as a beautiful touch! Amazing stuff! Please update soon. I look forward to reading more!
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  • From ladyazmodan on January 11, 2010
    Wow that was a great chapter! not to mention the drawing you did.. damn i can't even draw a phone doodle so i am ever so impressed with people who can actually draw, and you're good! Got some regular multi talent thing going on there :)
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