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Reviews for Fire in the Sky

By : swordqueen
  • From TwilightNaiad on October 05, 2009
    Sad. I like how they each took a part of Skyfire. In all good job, nice story.
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  • From GabrielC on September 29, 2009
    This has made me cry every time I have read it. It's emotive in all the right ways, not too sappy or sentimental. A beautiful and tragic story that explains a lot of why Starscream is the way he is and having read your epilogue for the first time, the last part it a nice touch, ties it up very nicely. This is one of my favourite stories and one of the best I think you've written to date. I really loved it.
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  • From ANON - Em on September 29, 2009
    Well, the last chapter certainly wrapped things up nicely, or at least as nicely as it could get, everything considered. It explains a lot about Starscream and both his sometimes skewed perception of things as well as his relationships with everyone around him. But, yeah, I agree with Barricade on this one- as unintentional as it may have been, Skyfire royally screwed Starscream up. Good story!
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  • From TwilightNaiad on September 27, 2009
    *cries* oh this is sad, yet it makes me want to keep reading. Poor Starscream.
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  • From KyuKoneko on September 27, 2009
    ;_;
    Oh no... Skyfire.

    I can't wait for the next chapter!


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  • From sordeopuella on September 26, 2009
    You're going to make me cry, aren't you? I have a feeling the end of this story is going to break my heart and yet I can't stop reading it.
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  • From TwilightNaiad on September 26, 2009
    Nice chapter. I like how he is cautious and tries to map out where he is. *waits for the hammer to fall tomorrow*
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  • From TwilightNaiad on September 25, 2009
    Nice. *Waits for the next chapter*
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  • From ANON - Em on September 25, 2009
    ::Moans:: oh this is going to end so, so badly isn't it? I want this to end well but, considering everything... yeah. This does give us a good look into some of the often ignored aspects of Starscream though and that little desperate/ reckless streak does explain his actions with Jen in the end of "Six Hours." I was wondering, are you using this story to set up an upcoming Starscream/Jen story where there are repercussions from their, er, bonding? I had no idea what an R.A. did until I went looking for an explanation and there is a whole world of possible situations that could be addressed and played with... Sorry, I really like your stories and find them both creative and entertaining.
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  • From TwilightNaiad on September 24, 2009
    Alone? Uh oh. I like it so far, keep going. :)
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  • From TwilightNaiad on September 23, 2009
    I think that you can pull off the beautiful/tragic. Personally I try to avoid tragedy stories because I always feel so sad afterwards, but since I like your stories and writing, I will read it. A possible speculation? I think this will define Starscream from Barricade because he will always remember the purity of love from this tragedy. Especially since it will be someone he admires and looks up to.
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  • From GabrielC on September 23, 2009
    I am looking forward to more :)
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