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Reviews for Heat

By : infinitehelix
  • From GrayHuntress on June 05, 2011
    Just wanted you to know how awesome I think your story is. Have you ever had an inclination to write more of it?
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  • From brainfear on January 27, 2010
    Wow. This is fantastic! I hope you continue with this soon!

    ch8
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  • From girlyhero on January 19, 2010
    Don't worry about accuracy. That's why they call it fanfiction. It doesn't have to be cannon. If readers wanted stuff that was completely cannon, then they're looking in the wrong place. The fact that you tried to make sense out of issues that would logically come up impresses me ^^ I think anyone who's ever tried writing xeno stories has had to think on toiletry issues. The story I'm writing, I ended that issue with her asking "Where's the toilet paper?" and him going "The what?" Keep in mind, you have a good stopping point once but I think you could go on for at least one more good chapter of them heading back to the base and making an adventurous escape off-world. Like I've said before, this is a great story (btw I was SL Barrett, but I got hitched over Xmas)
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  • From ANON - Feather Touch on November 30, 2009
    More.
    Now.

    I like your writing style, and where this story is going so I'd like to see it progress further, please!
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  • From speachestx on November 27, 2009
    yay! I got to read a new chapter! I know school sucks right.. lol But, you could always quit and write full-time for us.! hehe
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  • From ANON - Mandy Reel on November 26, 2009
    Omg, please write more
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  • From flamekaat on November 18, 2009
    Here's to hoping your health improves and you update soonest! I am very much enjoying how you do things here. Good stuff.
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  • From ANON - Bee on November 09, 2009
    I think she should go with him and have a daughter with him because he seemed to have ton of sons already so I think it would be terribly romantic if their first child is a beautiful daughter, half human and half predator. He can be the doting predator father! lol. I love this story and I love your feisty female character. Please post soon!
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  • From DeathGodDist on November 08, 2009
    Oh wow. Do please continue!

    What others said about your writing is so true. You bring up details that most other stories won't or can't. Stuff that has been mentioned like the science and biology aspects of the Yautja and how they would aversely affect humans. And it fits in the context of the story so well since Laila is a scientist who studies biology, so I just love the whole Q&A going on with her and Aep'ep, well, that and what they do when they're not questioning each other ;)

    Oh, and please tell me that reference to the japanese woman is who I think it is. Oh man if it weren't possible I'd love this story even more if you managed to include "her" somehow.

    Again, please keep going. You rock!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 05, 2009
    Astounding! Your story is entertaining, sexy, and well written,
    what a dynamic combination! I love the story and can not wait
    for more!
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  • From ANON - Ms.Moon on November 04, 2009
    Great as always. Love the fact that you actually thought of the environment and how it would effect a human :) keep up the good work.

    Ms.Moon
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  • From ginstar3 on November 04, 2009
    Wow I love your views as an author. I think that whatever you deem logical is whats best for your story. If its good enough for you to fantasize about, its good enough for your story...lolz. This story is so lush and erotic, while being intelligent and logical at the same time...love and Kudos
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  • From bloodravyn on November 04, 2009
    yays for this masterpiece finally being udated!
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  • From AndraiaGFSTS on November 03, 2009
    I have to say I am very impressed by your story, usually I hate OFC but this does make since. For a preditor to be interested in a human female enough to be willing to take her along for a ride she would be like this. And the story is very interesting read. I wonder how much of this information you are saying about the preditor is stuff that is known about it from the darkhorse comics vs stuff you are just makeing up to move the story along. Either way great story and well done!
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  • From ANON - Woot on November 02, 2009
    I hope you finish soon!! IT IS GREAT!
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