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Reviews for Eternal Kiss

By : shadowgohan
  • From ANON - ambrosia on November 25, 2014
    That. Was. Smokin' hot. Damn. Some minor spelling and grammatical errors aside, that was a very well written story. Observationally, some of the language the characters used when thinking or speaking was a little out of character (example, when Michael thought the words "More's the pity") as it was vernacular that sounded a bit old, archaic by modern standards. If Selene had thought in such words, awesome and appropriate. But Michael, unless an English buff, should stick to modern vernacular. Critique aside, incredibly sexy story that leaves me wanting more, more, more! You should do pieces for the sequel.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 19, 2013
    A awesome passion scene,between a hot vampiress and a horny werewolf! Congratulations!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 19, 2013
    i luv it!!!!!!! Selena x Michael!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 19, 2013
    You did an impressive job with this story! There's practically no way for me to critique it. It's well paced, there are nary a trace of errors grammatically, etc.
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  • From Safir84 on December 22, 2009
    Awesome one-shot you’ve here, I really liked it! The plot’s great and so was the character portrayal as well, as the character interaction, everything was also very well written and the smut sure was hot and very nicely described! Kudos!



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  • From ANON - Clarissa on November 24, 2009
    Full of cliches and ridiculous...not bad for a 12 year old.
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