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Reviews for Between the Lines: Sequel to Somewhere Between

By : AceMaxwell
  • From JackSoloBlack on June 25, 2012
    I just have to say, I am really enjoying reading these! lol. I'm about to start on Lines Of Shodow as soon as I write this. lol. Your plots for these have been excelent and (of course) the smut is always good too. lol. Gotta be some of the best Hellboy fics I've read to date. lol. Keep up the great work! lol.

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  • From ANON - Fallout-Angel on April 10, 2011

    you might want to fix the bottom of chapter 3 its really MESSY ...look you'll see.
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  • From Laiko on December 27, 2009
    I'm glad you didn't show us John's rape. I really have a hard time getting those kinds of images out of my mind. This is dark, darker than I thought it would be at first. You've done a great job with the characters. It really annoys me to see characters saying and doing things that are so far out of character, they're laughable. Damn you're good and damn cruel. Cliffhangers! Fucking hate them! Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work. I appreciate the effort.
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  • From on December 22, 2009
    NOOO!!! John is loosing himself! So glad that you updated dude.
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  • From on November 07, 2009
    Yay! Finally you updated! Its sad that John was raped! Good thing that pervert it dead!

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  • From bloodravyn on November 06, 2009
    i think the darkerness was just right!
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  • From on September 29, 2009
    AAAAAAHHHH! I hope that ugly dude doesn't rape John!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 17, 2009
    NOOOO! THERE'S NOTHING WRONG WITH THIS STORY! Its perfect the way it is that's why I love it!
    I hope John would be alright.
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  • From Winky73 on July 19, 2009
    Good luch with everything you have going on! You'll have at least one reader waiting for your next update. *hugs*
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  • From ANON - Josh on July 15, 2009
    I can dig it.

    Apart from your use of the word "Lycanthrope" where others might use "Lycanthropy," there's not much that flags for critical review. This (and its predecessor) have been extremely well-written, both abstractly and technically. The author captures the essences of the characters (down to mannerisms and speech devices) stunningly, the plots are, at once, believable and compelling. The construction of dialogue is natural and, more often than not, witty.

    Plus, there's hot werewolf/demon sex.

    Well-rounded and impressive. My compliments go to the author.
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  • From VioletUK13 on July 11, 2009
    I am a comic book fanfiction writer but I have been known to write on comic movies here on aff.net. I was reading your stories and I just wanted to tell you that I think you are one of the few good writers that I have come across on aff.net. It would be a shame to not have a conclusion to this story.
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  • From ANON - stigmatizedgeek on July 10, 2009
    I enjoy both this story and your first. Incredibly engaging, great plot, and fantastic characterization. I hope to see more.
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  • From ANON - silky on July 02, 2009
    Oh .. my .. god.

    I LOVE the original story, Somewhere Between, and I think your characterization of the characters is SPOT on! They all but pop off the page as I'm reading, and I can see them interact. Your story, in fact, was the only slash story I EVER recommended to a non-slash fan to read (usually, that doesn't go so well *chuckles* but even she was impressed with your writing!). When I saw that there might be a sequel to the original story, I jumped to reading it .. and was very saddened to see that it only has one chapter (so far). The thought that something might happen to John is .. heartbreaking! And I would love, love, love to see you continue this story so I can see how it turns out for the two of them.

    Please? *puppy eyes*
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  • From ANON - Tess on July 01, 2009
    Your first story of these two was great, and i was disappointed when it ended. When i saw the comment about the sequel, it was a happy thrill. Please continue this, it seems as though it would be as good as, if not better, then the first.
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  • From IntHellsing on June 26, 2009
    Ohh man. This seems really interesting.
    Massive potential and such.

    I'd love to see you continue, please.
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