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Reviews for His Rose

By : LBK
  • From Demonfox on June 09, 2014
    I loved it..it's nice to see Jason portrayed accurately.
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  • From AriesoftheForest on October 17, 2012
    Moar? Moar. Moar....? -puppy eyes-
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  • From JasonVoorheesRocks on July 12, 2010
    That was a Really great Stroy,Great Job,I really liked it.
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  • From IntHellsing on April 09, 2009
    Ohh god. I ran across this completely by accident... and it is THE CUTEST THING I'VE EVER READ.
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  • From cbarkins on April 09, 2009
    RE: sex scene

    Again! Again! Yey Jason for getting some nookie! Yey! Again, can they do it again!?
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  • From ANON - sarah on April 09, 2009
    please tell me that you are still working on this. i love it
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  • From oliversangel on April 09, 2009
    Forgot to tell you how the sex scene actually was, since you asked specifically for criticism on it...It was very good. I never would have known that it was your first had you not told me. I also thought Jason's reaction to getting head was sweet. Obviously, he liked it, but was able to control his baser instincts for Rose's sake, much to the couch's detriment of course. ^.^

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  • From oliversangel on April 09, 2009
    Awww, that was a wonderful firsy sex scene. Popped your cherry eh? Kind of a weird genre to do it in...but I'm not complaining, I love this story. Reading Jason's reactions to everything was sweet, honest and genuine, but I can't help but feel a foreboding....now that they are together, and things are going alright, I can't help but feel there is a tragic ending. I just don't see Jason as a domestic type to have a family and such. ^.^ " *Grunts* " translation - "I'm going out to kill some bad people in my woods. Have a good day honey, I'll see you at dinner. Kiss the kids for me." LOL. I can't wait for the next chapter. I actually did a happy dance when I saw this one posted. ^.^

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  • From oliversangel on March 31, 2009
    Awwwww!! That was so sweet!!! And I love how he is trying to sort out all these feelings that Rose is stirring within him. Poor guy, he has no idea what's coming.^.^ This is still a wonderful story, and I can't wait to read another installment.

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  • From ANON - fnxmoon2 on March 28, 2009
    EXCELLENT~ KEEP IT up!!!! MORE MORE MORE!!!
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  • From ANON - capt_davy_jones_gal on March 27, 2009
    i likes, keep going...im a jason fan myself
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  • From speedie234 on March 27, 2009
    ohhh i cant wait to see what happens next! great job please update soon!
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  • From oliversangel on March 27, 2009
    So....I was kind of wary when I saw what the story about...I thought it would be cheesy and stilted, and cliche, but...it's not. It's really good, I like it. I love the way that you add in his mother's voice, of course, it wouldn't be much of a Friday the 13th story without Mrs. Vorhees. I also liked the way you had him show Rose his name. As a little boy I am sure he could have recognized it, and I can really see him writing it like that for her. I hope this is making sense, I haven't gotten any sleep. I "awwwed" out loud when he went crashing through the forest looking for her, his concern is very endearing. You have a lovely style of writing, very easy to read, you get in all the important information without overwhelming us....the details and descriptions are wonderful. I cannot wait to read more. Hurray for insomnia!! twoot twoot!! LOL

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  • From ANON - christy on March 27, 2009
    The chemistry between is great. This is my first Friday 13th fic, (well, I've never seen the movies either, but of course I know exactly what it is). I never imagined that something about Jason could be so sweet and funny.

    One of my favorite parts was when Rose started running from him, and so, like a friendly dog, he starting chasing after her. Because that's what he does. I was giggling!

    Your writing style itself is enjoyable to read. The way you word things--I just like how you put your words together. Like your "good boy-good girl" paragraph. And you put so much information and feeling using such a small amount of words; every sentence delivers something.

    And your good with the awwwww factor. That was so tweet when he was touching her cheek!

    Even though this has been really cute so far, I get a sense of foreboding. It can't be good for Jason--or Rose--to get so attached to her when she's going to eventually leave. And he's setting up alarms around her house....

    Thank you so much.
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  • From ANON - freddy's girl on March 25, 2009
    Oooohhhh! I love it. KEEP IT UP
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