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Reviews for Strange Stirrings

By : SquireMuldoon
  • From ANON - fnxmoon2 on March 16, 2009
    MORE MORE MORE MORE
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  • From shiree022000 on March 05, 2009
    10 more cool ponts for another Great chapter!
    5 for some hardcore smut!
    An extra 5 because you're just cool peoples!

    Let's add that up ladies! Bringing you to...20 cool points! Oh! let's not forget the 10 from the chapter before! Can I get a drum roll please! That brings our total to........30 cool points!

    (I know I'm crazy!)

    Can't wait for me.
    Add when you can.
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  • From shiree022000 on March 05, 2009
    Awwwwwwwwww! I'm glad you brought the lovin' in this chapter. I really like that he got the concept of sex, most men who've done it countless times don't even understand the depths of being physical with a female. The way he see's and treats Dee makes him a beautiful person in my book. Bravo chica! Bravo! Now getting to the freak in him, I really loved it when he took charge like a man should but new when to relax and take it slow. That right there is so fuckin' sexy! Also, not making it to painful for Delores was a smart move. That would've really taken away from the scene and Jason probably wouldn't have enjoyed it as much if he felt like she was in pain because him.

    Another well written chapter! Take a bow!
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  • From speedie234 on March 05, 2009
    great chapter. update soon
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  • From ANON - Faerie In Combat Boots on March 03, 2009
    Why? Why leave me hanging like that? Though, the part where Dolores took off his mask did remind me strongly of Phantom of the Opera, only it didn't end in a fallen chandelier...
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  • From shiree022000 on March 03, 2009
    And you get 10 cool points!
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  • From shiree022000 on March 03, 2009
    I hate you! I hate you! Naw I'm just playin'. I don't hate you chica! You just gave me something to look forward too. That was another wonderful add.

    Oh! And there's not need to say you're sorry. There's no rush on perfection. Plus I completely understand shit happens sometimes. I hope everything's good with your mother now. You only get one so take care of her.

    Okay! Okay! Back to the story. There's something about unconditional love that really turns me on. The fact that someone loves you nomatter what is a beautiful thing. You can do no wrong with them and that's what Dee and Jason have.

    Awwwww...they both said their I love yous in their own little way. Dee just came right out and side it, which was very brave of her for someone who is normally so shy. Jason let her know he returned the feelings by finally letting her see who and what he truely his.

    On to the juicy stuff! I have to say Jason is a good study. He picked up how to work them lips on Dee's lips and lower lips quickly. I can't wait to see both of their reactions when they experience having sex for the first. I really love that Jason loves all of Dee's inperfections and that in his eyes she is perfection.

    Girl, this was another hot banger! Add when you can chica!
    Don't forget you rock!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 02, 2009
    Loooooooooove your story! Good jason smut. Ill try to b patient for the smut chapter.......is it up yet? You got it now?! How bout now!? Write it now! Now! Now! Lol
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  • From speedie234 on March 02, 2009
    I am loving this story......please update soon....
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  • From shiree022000 on February 22, 2009
    Oh! Did I say you rock! Well you rock!
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  • From shiree022000 on February 22, 2009
    “Better Late Than Raped.” What the fuck! lol That would've been to funny girl. You should've named it that forreal.

    And you're right virgins need play 2 and they usually have the freakiest minds. She definitly knew how to handle his big dick and didn't seem scared of it. Whoever that was that showed up and ruined their good time pissed me off. She said herself she wasn't done with him yet. They had to be crazy to think they could mess wilt his doll. I thought it was so freaking hot when he called her his. I wasn't mad when he killed them. Shit they deserved it! The fact that they thought she was wet and ready for them had me pissed. I was yelling at the sceen "That's not for you assholes! But I calmed down a great deal when Jason handled things. I love Jason's protective side. It's a major turn on. Well done chica! Great chapter! Add more when you can.

    Oh! I wanted to think you for adding so quickly. I can never find stories on here that really pull me in. This one rocks! If there was a way to add it to my favorites I would.
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  • From speedie234 on February 21, 2009
    You rock! Hurry up with next chapter.
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  • From shiree022000 on February 21, 2009
    Dee put it on him! For a virgin she sure gets right to the point and I like that. I wonder if he'll ever let her see his face. If so her reaction will be very interesting but how ever she reacts I'm sure she'll be mindful of his feelings. She seems like a down and excepting chick.

    I still really dig this story, so keep the adds coming chica!
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  • From speedie234 on February 19, 2009
    Good job! Can't wait for more!
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  • From theredangel on February 15, 2009
    Hey, this is pretty cool! Keep it up!!
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