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Reviews for Sparrabeth: Needing the Unwanted

By : thewriter
  • From AddictedToJack on December 16, 2008
    I knew she wouldn't be able to forget Jack and his magic fingers :)Hurry up and update asap.Please!!! Need to find out how Lizzie will welcome Jack^^.
    I find your English very good.You are doing a fantastic job.I know from my own experience how tough it is to write in a foreign language- so big,huge credit for you!!!Hugs!!!
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  • From AddictedToJack on December 16, 2008
    Wonderful!!!*melts* I absolutely loved Jack's idea to hold back and make her want him more,make her want to come back to him again for more!
    I'm sure she will never forget their little tryst.She will ache for him like never before.Great job on this chapter.I'm so happy there is still another one to read^^
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  • From AddictedToJack on December 16, 2008
    Oh,what a great start! I nearly melted like Lizzie did.It was so hot...Need to read more!
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  • From Jacksfavoritewench on December 07, 2008
    Once again brilliant chapter! Can't wait for the update!

    JackSparrowsWench
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  • From LizzieSwan on December 04, 2008
    Great goin'! HOT...
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  • From Jacksfavoritewench on December 02, 2008
    Wow this story has incredible potential so far! I love it and cannot wait for the next chapter!! You write very well for these characters and I thought your English was wonderful.

    JackSparrowsWench
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  • From LizzieSwan on December 02, 2008
    Wow! Great! Realy, I loved it! Well done, keep goin'.

    “This is wrong, Jack.”
    “I know, Liz’beth. But feels right, doesn’t it?’
    Yeah!...
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