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By : LaurenGraceJurious
  • From oliversangel on January 31, 2009
    Again with the evil cliffies. Arrg!! I knew that his father would be disapointed. I'm glad he came to accept it, and realized that he spoke a bit too harshly. Poor Larena. At least she's getting some drugs. The most magical words a laboring woman can hear. I know. ^.^ I noticed Red didn't mention the speediness of her pregnancy. And OH NO!! What's going on Larena? I am thinking and hoping that it isn't something bad, and that it is twins or something. Well, I am eagerly awaiting the next installment. ^.^ XXOO
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  • From Kurokajin on January 29, 2009
    Wow, this is a great story. I'm very excited for the next chapter. I like your Original Character. I've greatly enjoyed reading your stroy so far and am anxious to see what else you have in store. Great flow, characterization, and imagery. You have alot of skill and talent in writing.
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  • From psychebemused on January 26, 2009
    C'mon C'mon C'MONNNnnnnn!!! *dances around excitedly because patience has never been my strong suit*
    Okay, that's out of my system. *L* LOVED the update. I'm glad Abe is there, but I also love how you portray Red as being so caring, trying to keep Larena calm and reassure her. Of course he's the same Red we know and love with everyone else.

    And I have to say I'm a little jealous because I can't update nearly as fast. *pouts a little*
    Looking forward to more!
    psyche b
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  • From oliversangel on January 26, 2009
    AHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! You give us such evil cliffies woman!! Thank you for updating by the way. ^.^ Hurray Abe is there, and he's helping her. I am wondering what his explanation is going to be for this parid pregnancy. I am also dying to know what the professor's reaction is going to be as well? I am sure Myers is going ot be all pissy that HB was hiding Larena in the compound, and that he knocked her up. I imagine there is going to be loads of confusion on everyone's part, perhaps Manning bitching about having one, well two more people to have to take care of. But I doubt that's going to be an issue, I know Larena is going to be a great mother, and won't give anyone any trouble. Oh, I shall try to wait patiently for the next installment. XXOO
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  • From psychebemused on January 23, 2009
    *finishes screaming in frustration*
    Geez and i thought that i was nasty about cliffhangers and making people wait. *L* i like the idea of the abbreviated pregnancy, and the feeling of awkwardness while walking without really knowing why. The 'other reason' you mentioned was brilliant too! What a way to tell people though. "She's been hiding here for weeks now. Say hi, and oh by the way, she's having my baby...right now." I don't know if i would be brave enough to try and write a conversation like that....but i'm REALLY curious to read one!!

    Totally loved the new chapter and i'm beyond flattered that you would make reference to my story at the beginning of it.
    psyche b
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  • From oliversangel on January 22, 2009
    I totally squeed when I saw the update. Honestly. LOL. Wow, I wish I could have a pregnancy that short. Only 5 weeks and that's it. Kick ass. And oh crap is right. LOL. Poor red, and poor Larena, they were just gearing up to tell the professor, and everyone else, how in the hell is that going to work now, she's in labor!! Sheesh. LOL. Oh Abe, hurry up, and don't ask too many questions. There isn't much time!! And Larena is probably going to start really freaking out soon. Oh poor thing. How is she going to have this baby? Is he or she going to be ginormous, requiring a c-section like she fears? Oh Lord, this is an evil cliffie. But I have confidence that you will get us another chapter out quickly. What's his father going to say? What's Manning going to say? Oh gawrsh, I'm just so eager to find out what's going to happen next!! *grins* Well, off to read the next chapter of Adrift, and I can't thank you enough for suggesting the other HB story to me. Any other stories you think I should read? I would read anything you suggest because you have fabulous taste. ^.^ XXOO
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  • From bonnyblonde on January 22, 2009
    Hi Grace,

    Although I don't know much more about Hellboy than what I've seen in the movies, I am SO glad to see you were finally able to post Chapter 3 (this despite all the *other* demands placed upon your time by certain unnamed authors! *ahem*

    I am really liking your story though - it's amazing how strong that bond between your characters is already, and the movie plays itself out in my head seamlessly. Keep going, I so enjoy your writing regardless of the genre!

    Laura
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  • From psychebemused on January 08, 2009
    ACK!! I really hope you just meant "The end" of the chapter. I was so happy to see another chapter added to this story because your beginning was so interesting. I'm terrible about checking back for stories i enjoy (too busy writing too many of my own!) but i'm glad i did today. I loved the detail you used...especially about the herbs.

    Lack of reviews disappoint me too sometimes...but usually my muse won't leave me alone anyways. *L* If you're enjoying it...WRITE IT!
    Looking forward to more!
    psyche b
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  • From oliversangel on December 28, 2008
    *groans* People are so damn stingy with reviews. That irks me to no end..seeing the counter climb, and hardly any votes and reviews. As you are aware, I always leave reviews for a story I enjoy. It's the least I can offer in the way of thanks for a talented writer taking the time to write and publish a fantastic story. I like Hellboy. I think it's a bit sad that I think...Ron Pearlman is it?..is hot as Hellboy, but not so much as himself..although he does make a semi-dashing "Anarchist". ^.^ And you should make no apologies for using OC's. If the so called loyal "shippers" don't like them, they don't have to read the story or offer their criticisms for them being used. They don't HAVE to read the story, no one is making them. I like this story, I am sad that you don't want to finish it..it's good, and I want to find out what happens. You did good research on the "nun stuff" and the "herb stuff" in regards to the witchcraft. I myself am very anal about that sort of thing, and often spend as much time doing research as I do writing the story itself. Even though I don't watch "Sons of Anarchy", I will read your story, as you are a fantastic writer. I think I have two of your stories left to read, R&R. Your Elizabeth/Jack one, and I forget the other one. ^.^ XXOO
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  • From Poisongirl on November 11, 2008
    Nice! Please continue!
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  • From psychebemused on November 09, 2008
    Hi,

    I have to say, I like seeing outside characters introduced. I guess that's why I use them in my fics.....the unknown quantity is always most interesting because you have to figure out what it is. And, if you have a good story to tell, you're qualified to tell it. I hope you write more.

    psyche b
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