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Reviews for Broken

By : Jacksfavoritewench
  • From MrsAlexander on May 11, 2009
    !!! AAUUGGHHH NOOO I love the story, I love how you've kept so very true to the feel of the movies and the characters and wow, but come oonnn! Poor Lizzy! My heart jumped into my throat when you brought him back. I'm sure you have a plan but, just, augh! Keep updating!
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  • From Vyper on October 27, 2008
    Unfortunately for Will, I think he should remain deceased for Jack's and Elizabeth's sake since it has taken so long for Elizabeth to finally accept her feelings. Good story. Hope Elizabeth tells Jack and they get hitched.
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  • From Vyper on October 23, 2008
    I hear a redition of 'Let's Get It On' playing in the background. I love this. Keep going.
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  • From Vyper on October 17, 2008
    Sounds like she needed some rum and some jack to like cool her nerves. I never knew alchohol could do that to someone. Oh well, still Jack will get some soon and he won't have to down any coke for it.
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  • From Vyper on October 14, 2008
    Very nice story. I like this one, but I hope things work out for Elizabeth and Jack. Ten years apart is an awful long time when you cannot be with the one you love and not have him living for you.
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  • From AddictedToJack on October 13, 2008
    I'm so anxious to read about Singapore!!Hope that this stupid Barbossa is wrong about Lizzie...She HAS TO forget the whelp.And she will!
    Great job ,darling!Thanks to you there is always something sparrabethy to read.Thank you!!!
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  • From SassySparrow on October 08, 2008
    I like this chapter, especially regarding the idea of Barbossa being keehauled length the Pearl... hehehe... can we have that some time... any time... soon? ;o))
    Wonderful writing, you're always making my day with every new chapter you write.
    Hoist the clours high!
    ~Sassy~
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  • From AddictedToJack on September 30, 2008
    No!!!How can she cry for Will after THIS,huh???I don't get it...How can she even THINK of him after making love to Jack???
    Poor Jackie...She used him and broke his heart...I think...
    Great steamy chappie,mate!
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  • From AddictedToJack on September 29, 2008
    Wow!Another chapter!I loved it as always and I can't wait to see Jack making Lizzie forget Will...She HAS TO forget him!
    More please!
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  • From SassySparrow on September 29, 2008
    Oh my.... very dark story! I love the second chapter, good to see that Jack cares for Lizzie. And I wonder what the witch in Singapore has in store to help her.
    Wonderful writing, please keep up your excellent work, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
    Hoist the colours high!!!!
    ~Sassy~
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  • From AddictedToJack on September 28, 2008
    Good!Definitely good!I'd love to read more!
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