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Reviews for Hindsight

By : Kireania
  • From ANON - Anon on November 16, 2008
    you need to write more of this story. I love it! it was just getting hot too.
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  • From Ronnie1980 on November 05, 2008
    And once again you comes up with a great chapter... no wonder why i love your fic... ^^
    the action between krys and HB is briliantly written. ^^ i hate Krys' sister fyi... lol

    soo i'm of to type more on my own fic whilst waiting on more from you...

    love ya hun...
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  • From ANON - peyaluna on October 31, 2008
    since my internetexplorer got murdered by an evil virus i all but have to jump through burning wheels right now to reach this site, but beeing rewarded with such an awesome chapter makes it more than worth it!! *purrs in uttermost delight* things between red+krys are heating up immensely and her family is busted as evil magicians aka a case for the bprd...god, i SO want to be a fly at the wall when dali comes home and tells the others that lil´sis is now under the protection of hellboy - bet they didn´t see that coming at all LOLOL
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  • From ANON - Peya Luna on October 24, 2008
    *whines impatiently* i want an update! please! the tension+suspense is killing me! i want to see/read red´s totally bafflerd reaction towards whatever seduction krys has planned for him...maybe she´s making another song for him? and aside from their budding relationship, í still haven´t forgotten about her family,and i´m betting dollars to donuts that they haven´t forgotten about krys either. wonder what evil plot they´re planning - and what this weird ritual was about. if her family was willing to slaughter several girls for it, it must have been totally important to them.
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  • From Ronnie1980 on September 25, 2008
    what can i say exept... They met... yayness for that... a qute chap... lol
    i just love krys's pov... and poor ol' HB... :P all his trouble with explaining... just great. ^^

    see ya hun... ~huggles~
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  • From ANON - merlyn on September 24, 2008
    After a bit of a slow start this is turning into a very good story line. Keep the chapters coming as quick as possible!
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  • From ANON - Peya Luna on September 20, 2008
    werewolves as watch dogs?! damn, what is her mom, voldemorts little sister? her family members must really be some mighty + evil magicians/satanists/? and if they´re willing to send a bunch of werewolves into N.Y city to get her back, they´ll probably even try to steal her back from the bprd. poor krys...i can´t wait for the next chapter, reds thoughts about finally having her near him - and her reaction to him when she wakes up.
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  • From Ronnie1980 on September 18, 2008
    I still love your fic hun... keep it up, and have fun in class... :P

    can't wait to find out what happens next...

    see ya..

    Draconian_Love
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  • From Ronnie1980 on September 18, 2008
    O__O holy f**k... Myers found Krys... omg... i love you... lol...
    can't wait for the next chapter at all...
    huggles big time...

    Spread the yayness from Draconian_Love aka Princess Ann
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  • From ANON - Peya Luna on September 16, 2008
    hm...you managed to give some details about poor krys and yet raise even more questions in this chapter.*slightly frustrated* what crazy experiments is her family doing to her and why? with the hunger for blood and the weird looking eyes i guess its save to say that they are rather magical than medical, plus her fears of her family reading her thoughts hints that they aren´t exactly human...and this three times bathing in a row all but screams cleansing ritual, though its weird that they mistreat the bride/sacrifice in such a way. i would say her whole damn family including that guy she´s engagaed with since she was eleven(!!) are a case for red+the samaritan!!
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  • From Ronnie1980 on September 16, 2008
    OMG... I love the story and i can't wait for the next chap...
    keep up the good work love... And spread the yayness

    huggles Draconian_Love
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  • From Poisongirl on September 14, 2008
    Good Story....BUT.....BUT....BUT....You really should read the comics...I'll bet that not only would they inspire you, they'd also give you quite a bit to draw on, plot and Character wise....Thank You for the decent tale, my Dear.....
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  • From 8mimi8 on September 12, 2008
    Pretty good story line, you do however NEED someone to beta read your work, just see if any of the other more experienced authors would be willing to do a little editing. Also, don't tell us what they "would do" just day what they ARE doing. Example: Hellboy would walk down the hall and would eat a sandwich. VS: Hellboy walked down the hall and ate a sandwich.

    Using "would" makes it very hard to read because it sounds like you are making a prediction rather than telling a story. SO yeah... if you take out the woulds and just tell us what they are all doing directly it would vastly improve your writing style and people will be more likely to read and get into the story.

    Here is a pretty good writing guide, it has a lot of tips and ideas as to how to make your writing more professional, check it out and like I said, find a beta reader/correcter/editor who can give it the once over and catch grammatical and spelling errors that Word doesn't. http://littlecalamity.tripod.com/HowTo2.html

    Happy writing!
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  • From ANON - Peya Luna on September 12, 2008
    i´m so damn curious that i´m chewing on my nails here! who(or maybe what ;-) is that girl, whats her problem, how can they save her AND how will she react when she finds out with whom exactly she´s been chatting for years?! btw, since you´ve mentioned that this isn´t your hb/myers story, i´ll take that this will be a red/myers/krys story, right?
    i hope you´ll update soon - and thanks for allowing anonymous reviews, for i cant log in to this site somehow *sniff* (otherwise i would give a certain missfae the dressing down of her live for writing a story with a TOTALLY NEEDLESS heartbreaking end *fumes* i hope you´ll read this, missy!!)
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