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Reviews for Breaking Barriers (Chapter 28 up)

By : TheArtist
  • From theskyatdawn2 on May 14, 2018

    To bad you abandoned this story, because you are talented.


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  • From ANON - on July 12, 2016

    Such a slow burn! But it's an amazing story! Please update soon!


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  • From ANON - Kimberly on July 16, 2015
    I absolutely love your story, I'm dying to know what happens next! Please, please update!!
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  • From schwelty on September 16, 2012
    I'm really sad this never got completed. :(
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  • From Davanyn on June 20, 2012
    this is a fantastic story! so much fun, thank you for sharing it. when do you think you will post the next chapter, i have been spoiled by picking up the story with 28 chaptes but the end of the last one Definately leaves me wanting more ;) i do like how you made the crystals seem sentient, and that fact that Jareth has either forgotten that or was never aware of it.. and i love Curlique she is something else :)
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  • From schwelty on January 22, 2012
    Well I finally reached the end of Chapter 28. Good God, woman! I noticed that you put up a note to the readers but that disappeared before I could read it. Wonder what is said? I have a hunch it's life/school/job stuff. So I wish you luck on that if that's the case! ....However, the way things are going. If this story is actually gonna include...ahem..."relations", I bet it won't be for another twenty chapters! ;P So...hmm...another year or two? Hah! Just teasing! I'm just really eager to see how well your writing skills will be when it finally comes...to that. ;) Don't leave us fangirls hanging! ;D The way you have with words is exquisite! Also, just can't seem shake it off. Don't you suppose Jareth would be a little more crude by using actual foul language rather than "Underground's sake" Or "what in blazes"? Seemed a wee bit off character and I just thought I would point that out. One of the things that kept me reading is that you truly stuck with the characters' personalities without giving in to writing pure smut. I could throw any other generic character in a piece of smut and it would all fit. Not your Jareth and Sarah! :D
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  • From schwelty on January 17, 2012
    I absolutely cannot stop reading this. It's been seven months since this has last been updated? :( Please tell me you're not gonna leave this story without a conclusion!!
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  • From TheLadyMeow on January 08, 2012
    I just found this story and I absolutely love it. Your writing and story telling skills are fantastic. I'm very sad to see this stopped, please update!
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  • From lillyput93 on September 17, 2011
    Please!!!!!!! WRITE MORE!!!!!
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  • From sisterstyx on April 06, 2011
    More more more please!!!
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  • From draegonfire on January 02, 2009
    It looks like Sarah finally found out about her powers. Maybe the crystals will show her the truth of why she's there. Maybe once she learns about the Goblin City, she'll agree to fixing things. Although I can imagine she'd be pretty angry at Jareth for not telling her why she was there in the first place.
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  • From oliversangel on December 17, 2008
    Just wanted to pop in and make sure everything is alright with you. I had to reread it again. *sigh* It really is such a beautifully written story. You are an incredibly talented authoress. I was reading the beginning summary again, how you said this would be 20 chapters or so...I am getting the feeling it's going to be more towards 50. They are only just barely acknowledging their feelings for each other, and it's at chapter 26....But I am happy. Because I am selfish enough to want you to continue this story forever, and more chapters equals more for me to read!! yay!! This is one of the stories I have most enjoyed reading in a very long time!! XXOO
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  • From BrightShadow on December 12, 2008
    Goddamnit, I'm getting deja vu here. The first words that want to come out of my keyboard are the exact same ones I told another author in my usual Games section haunt some two years ago... and since I can't think of anything better to say, here goes, and I mean this in the best, nicest, most sincere way possible.

    I hate you.

    I read through this in two large chunks (granted, with a three plus month gap in between), and... holy raptor-stomping pharaoh testicles, if this were Highlander, I would hunt you down and lop off your head. The only real niggling flaws I can ever find (for whatever my opinion's worth) are the occasional grammar and syntax errors, and maybe, maybe a pacing hiccup here or there. Well, and paragraphs the size of Russia, but still, holy shit!

    I can't process where to start praising, seeing for how long the review would end up as... well, I'd have to take several hours just to figure out what to say, anyways. In short: you, story, amazing, more, soon, please, thank you.
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  • From FlionndaWall on November 11, 2008
    Amazing! If only the little one can help get them together withough getting herself into trouble! I can't wait for more!
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  • From Vyper on November 08, 2008
    I love this chapter,thanks. I know how it is when work and home and all of that can cause problems to get back here so I am just glad you are back. I always look up your story so even if there isn't a new chapter I just wait. I will keep waiting. I am writing a romance, comedy, action triolgy myself about the Predators called A Strange Match and starting the second one called A Strange Home. I am going to add some tragedy into the second one and the third. I don't work yet although I have been putting in applications. It sucks out there so hope your job is a good one and if it is hang onto it. Once again great story and I liked this chapter a lot.
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