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Reviews for Deception

By : Jacksfavoritewench
  • From AddictedToJack on September 02, 2008
    YAY! A new story!Great start...I was celebrating when she finally told Will about her feelings for Jack.
    Seeing her so sad and heartbroken in the beginning of AWE,one really , simply HAS TO think that she LOVED Jack. And you wrote it perfectly!Thanks for that!
    Will....ugh...I hate this guy! This stupid yeasty fish face almost forced himself on her!I'm so relieved that in the end he came to his senses and left her alone.Bastard!

    Write more,mate!Asap!
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  • From PrincessofthePearl on September 01, 2008
    I really liked this, it has a lot of potential! Good job!
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