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Reviews for The Legion Saga

By : nazgul109
  • From wingsofseyfert on January 10, 2013
    This story is absolutely amazing. Honestly the premise of Qui-Gon Jinn creating a clone army of Anakins is a scary thought indeed. In fact this story could have stood alone without all the sex and incest (not that I'm complaining!) because the actual plot itself is so engaging and well within the realms of the Star Wars universe itself. It is a very possible, plausible and intriguing AU.

    I love how you handled Padme in the first chapter. How she seemed to transform from an insecure teenager to the confident and almost arrogant woman seen in the movies. She put her handmaiden in place and I loved how you used the political intrigue regarding Obi-Wan's name to make the turning point. The negations at the Hutt Palace was a very smart move. It still placed us in Tatooine where Anakin and his mother can still meet the Jedi while at the same time giving a justifiable reason for being there (that is a financial dispute that requires the unbiased mediation of a Hutt). The sexual depravity was a good look into the going on's inside Jabba's palace. Funny that Shmi expressed concern for Anakin working in this place and was afraid he would turn into a deviant only to find that later in the story he ended up way worse than Jabba ever was because of her seducing her own son later in the story. How very ironic indeed. Great job of foreshadowing there!

    You really made Qui-Gon look like a scrub. I liked him the first movie of the prequels but he wasn't conventional and I liked how you used that fact to make Qui-Gon go through this insane idea of forming a legion of Anakins. For some reason the sex scene between him and Tuan We was hot even though Taun We is clearly an alien.

    I was a bit disturbed that Anakin was so readily to ravage his mother despite the fact that she had been victimized by Tusken Raiders but then again fault could be found with Shmi with encouraging his behavior. The resulting rapefest in Kamino was disturbing and more so with the Senators. The fact that Luke is Anakin's son but at the same time not really his son was eerie. Even later in the story where Anakin regards his grown son and says “I have often wondered if you truly are my son. You have my looks, but something about you has never felt right.” Its scary because Anakin is the father but not in the technical sense since it was his clones that had ravaged Shmi to result in Luke's birth. I was kind of glad that Anakin never found out even to the end. Assaj Ventress is disgusting and thought of her being in any sort of sexual play is a definite turn off but it did make sense and provided ample reasoning as to why she turned on Sidious for Anakin instead.

    On a side note let my inner geek take over for a minute. I'm sad no one else in the reviews commented on this but I absolutely LOVED Count Dooku's lines.
    No matter how many the Jedi could slay, there were thousands against them.
    “Tens of thousands.” Dooku corrected himself.
    And then this one:
    “Against this darkness, there can be no victory.” Dooku announced, his voice echoing across the com.

    Lines referencing Saruman's in the movie version of "The Two Towers." Awesome job giving tribute to Christopher Lee as he played both Saurman and Dooku. Anyway the rest of the story continued in such a familiar yet different way. Courscant being destroyed instead of Alderran, then Luke raping Leia, then the final meeting between Anakin, Luke and Leia in an insesctous debauchery. Such an horrible irony that both Padme and Leia raped by the same man. However I found it pretty hot and the ending was awesome also with mother/daughter thing going on.

    In all this story was top tier and really could stand alone without the sex in it that's how good the plot is. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece. Great story it was well worth the read!
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  • From ANON - SithLover on October 15, 2011
    I loved this story so much, I also really liked Leia's DP scene in the throne room, to bad it wasn't longer.... and had alot more fucking in it
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  • From ANON - Austin on February 26, 2009
    I liked this series very much and in fact all of your series were well written and though out. I have just one request, for the sake of anyone reading this please put a disclaimer stating that you do not support incest or believe that any of the things that take place in your stories are in any way realistic, this is for those who believe in sordid worlds and are easily corrupted by these thoughts.
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  • From ANON - horny slut on November 27, 2008
    i fingered my self to every chapter,so fukn hot
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  • From ANON - CaptainCool on November 21, 2008
    This story was very fun to read. The detail was shocking and the little twists and such to Canon was incredible. Good sex too!
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  • From thmanwithnoname on October 26, 2008
    I like your other stories, but I think this one is my fav.
    I'm really looking forward to anything else you write.

    (this may not be the proper place to ask, but didn't you have a fifth story here before? something about blue harvest?)
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  • From ANON - Tilly on August 29, 2008
    This story was vulgar, crude, offensive and very very wrong.
    I absolutely loved it. Thank You so much, reading this was alot of fun.
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