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Reviews for A Union of Convenience II

By : Keen
  • From ANON - prairie on November 23, 2014
    Keen, if you're still checking in here after all these years just know that musey and I still miss you and you can still contact me anytime. Be safe
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  • From ANON - pure awsomeness on July 16, 2010
    Love your story please add me to the update list thingy. :)
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  • From ANON - Wranch on December 21, 2009
    You're back :D
    This chapter's interaction among Gi's children and between them and Fushel is lovely, taking credits for saving him a seat and stuff.
    I like the many faces you give Fushel, he is a loyal friend to Ali, that's the first impression I have for him. And now it seems that although he's lascivious, he's also capable of rising above and be a good protector for Gi, his consideration and the kids accepting him(but JalarXD) and him asking Isis for help and all. Mostly though, I like him for his smugness. But what's with the remark of forgiving? Did he do something wrong to Gi previously? I can't recall :S

    Again, thanks for sharing!

    (a little early but Merry Christmas :D)
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  • From ANON - Shortest_warrior on December 17, 2009
    Great update, Keenstuff. It's so fun seeing Fushel squirm in regards to the kids. I had to go back and read Chappie 11. It was too much of a gem not to. XD

    It will be interesting to see if he can keep his dick in his loin cloth when it comes certain 'elements'.

    I like the sound of this young unblood. I hope he comes back into the scene at some point. After all, he had the compassion to see if Gi was alright.

    Looking forward to your next update, Keenstuff.
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  • From DeathGodDist on December 14, 2009
    Keeeeeen! OMG you're back!!!

    I'm so happy you're still able to continue this story. It is such a long-running tale that you've really become attatched to all the characters after all this time. The tragedy of Gi really is such a sad story, especially considering how she was pretty much the most cheerful and happy character. And of all the people she wound up with, it had to be Fushel, heh. But I guess he's trying, in his own way, even though he really is such a horny bastard.

    So yeah, it was just such a wonderful treat to see this updated. I hope you will still be able to continue it down the line, even if it takes some time to get a chapter done. It just is such a great story.

    Take care and Bravo!
    -DGD
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  • From ANON - Bee on December 13, 2009
    Oh my lovely Keen. This is my favorite story. I feel like you are the last of the great authors that actually still updates their predator fics! Thank goodness!

    I love Fushel, he is all masculine and trying to figure out how to take care of a ready made family. I love how you write him. Also I feel so bad for Gi, she is trying to survive losing the love of her life and taking care of her children. It's a hard thing to do, but hopefully Fushel will help heal her broken heart... *wink* *wink* lol.


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  • From ANON - sem on December 12, 2009
    amazing!!!!! AS ALWAYS
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  • From torturequeen06 on December 09, 2009
    I absolutely adore this story and I really can't wait to read more. The characters are amazing and they all stand alone in their own way. I have fallen in love with your characters as well as the way that you write. I'm happy that I came across this story as well as your profile. If I hadn't checked out your profile, I wouldn't have found the predaphile network. So, thank you very much for that. All in all, amazing story, great new chapter, and I can't wait for the next one to come out. Don't really care how long it takes you, I will be waiting patiently for it.
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  • From ANON - Wranch on December 02, 2009
    I know it is rude to rush a writer but I miss this story so much, please come back : )
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  • From MsBloodMoon on November 09, 2009
    Why is the story on hiatus? =< I love your writing... my email is cursed_darkness@hotmail.com
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  • From ginstar3 on August 02, 2009
    OMG you just want to smack th smug out of Fushel. My heart breaks for Gi.Why of all people did Heron have to die. He was such a hero. always there, always comforting. please update soon.
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  • From ANON - LovyDovy on June 01, 2009
    Wow! Impressive. I love this and am scared for Gi. I can't imagine what will happen next. I hope we will find out soon.
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  • From DeathGodDist on June 01, 2009
    Wow Keeno, you just continue to whip out awesomeness after awesomeness (is there such a thing as too much awesome? Certainly not here! :) )

    I was chuckling a lot at Fushel's dilema trying to deal with all the children, he really is in a tight spot. Will he really make himself into an unredeemable ass? Oh, and of course, Ali'shir and Isis interactions FTW (punching the dick is foreplay huh? :D)

    You still are pulling at my heartstrings with Gi. Sounds like she was able to have such a nice big family unlike most others, and now all those little kids will grow up without their father. Poor Heron :(

    Anyway, superb as always!
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on May 30, 2009
    You are cookin' girl. You should slow down a bit, but not as slow as me. hehe

    I don't trust Fushel as far as I could kick him. I hope he slips up and Isis can kick butt. It'll be interesting to know if Gi actually saw in her visions who killed them. Shall have to wait and see.

    Good chappies Keenstuff. Don't forget, I, I mean we need some pussy teasing in the mix too. XD
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  • From DeathGodDist on May 24, 2009
    Wow Keeno! Welcome back! And two chapters coming right after another. You rock!

    As always, extremely well written and the characters are just so wonderful to read about. Poor Heron and Gi though, that really was sad. I wonder how she'll deal with all of this.

    Lots of interesting politics you're weaving into this one too with all the elder stuff. It is very entertaining. I'll definitely continue to look forward to this one continuing. :)

    -DGD
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