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Reviews for Finding Home

By : psychebemused
  • From LaurenGraceJurious on January 17, 2009
    Okay, I admit, I was reading your story in out of order chunks, so now that I've read the entire thing, I'm reviewing it again!:-) Bethany is a fabulous OFC! I love her back story, and her special ability, and she fits into Red so very well! You've done a better job with her than I actually think they did with matching Liz to Red in the movies!

    And I've read that last scene over and over about 4 times now! It's not just the obvious cheap thrills that keep me coming back, it's the successful way you've conveyed the need, desire, hope and reluctance of both characters that stays with me the most! The conflicting emotions were all so very real and you portrayed them in a way that every reader can easily relate to!

    I'm so glad to know that I'm not the only one who sees Red, or OFC's this way!:-)

    Grace
    dragonhorse18h@yahoo.com
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  • From LaurenGraceJurious on January 15, 2009
    Okay, so when is the next installment coming?:-) I finally had time to check out your story, been wanting to since it seems that fics in this genre that are not slash are difficult to come by! Not that I dislike slash, but personally, I just don't think it works well with a character like HB. But I love this story! I love how he is with Bethany, and I love the way you work in the differences between them physically while juxtaposing them to how they feel emotionally, it's a really nice "we're all the same on the inside" kinda theme that I'm enjoying! And all the anticipation and interruptions whenever they get close to having sex! Wow, you're so much stronger than I am, I give in way to quickly, but the way you've stretched it all out is so titallating and you can really feel their frustrations, needs and hopes! Great job! Plus, I love the idea of random female agents coming onto Red because they're "curious," wow, that's a oneshot waiting to happen!:-)

    Thanks for reading and also for reviewing my story! I am slowly working on Chapter 3, hope to have it up soon! I also hope you've got more posted soon, because I'm totally hooked now!:-)

    Grace
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  • From ANON - merlyn on November 25, 2008
    fab chapter, but where have you been? i am loving this story more as soon as please
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  • From ANON - timehealer on August 29, 2008
    a truelly great read
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  • From ANON - blue on August 28, 2008
    its a wonderful story, its one of the best of its kinds that i've read so far and i really look forward to reading more (soon hopefully)
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  • From ANON - Katie on August 22, 2008
    You can't leave me hanging like that! I need more.
    Seriously, this is brilliant written and I can just feel the emotions between HB & Bethany. You need to write more :)
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  • From LadyDraculea on August 22, 2008
    I'm usually a HB/John fan, but I'm enjoying this very much. I don't really have much more to add to that, just thought I'd let you know. I do check a couple of times a week to see if you've updated, so you've definitely caught my attention.

    Smile,
    Lady D
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  • From Primal on August 21, 2008
    this is great! i can hardly find any HB/OC fics on here or anywhere and this one is great, please update soon
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  • From ANON - Leanne on August 20, 2008
    Hello. I think that your story 'Finding Home' is brilliant. Please continue it!
    I love the way you have integrated Bethany into the story - she feels like one of the characters in the Hellboy universe. Your chapters are large and you have a great way with words, both in terms of conveying action and emotion. The build up of tension and the feeling of Bethany and Hellboy liking one another just feels natural. It is extremely rare to find an eloquent story on this site that isn't sex with no point, or doesn't make you cringe at the way the characters are speaking or acting.

    Congratulations on a brilliant story. Please update soon, as I eagerly await the next chapter! I think your writing is fab :)
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  • From ANON - capt_davy_jones_gal on August 17, 2008
    keep going i like it
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  • From FieldsofHeather on August 16, 2008
    More Please. I'm really liking this.
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  • From MissAmazing on August 16, 2008
    Finally! A good HellBoy fic has been created! I was expecting more stories since the new movie came out but...blah none. Except this wonderously awesome story! If you ever need feed back just ask me because I can guarantee that you will get it. Can't wait for what's next! Roni
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  • From ANON - Max on August 16, 2008
    It's really no fault of your own that you're not getting responses here. If you're looking for comments, turn your story into a M/M. This section is more into slash, mainly and *especially* John and Hellboy, poorly written or othwerise. Hellboy and Liz stories to a lesser extent, also poorly written or otherwise.

    Overall, your story is fine. Decent writing, pacing, backstory. Bethany seems like a relatable enough character. The only fault I see is everything at the BPRD seemes to suddenly be centered around her and her ablities (slight mary-sueness)and the pairing between she and HB is a little slow going. Spend more time building up the tension between the two, getting them into hot situations and you'll probably draw more attention to your story.

    Best of luck.
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  • From ANON - miho_kw on August 16, 2008
    I really like "Finding Home". Your male charakters are very fascinating and I can`t wait to read what will do Hellboy. And what is ahead of ours heroes :)
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  • From 0neiromantiC on July 22, 2008
    I chuckled at the ending.
    You got a start of a Mary-Sue.
    I will say some people may find it hard to read because of it.

    But.

    I skimmed it.
    You have the sarcasm, intriguing char, and leaves the relationship to be figured out.
    Looks like a HB/OC fic in the making from what Ive read so far.

    Keep working dear.
    There is much to be accomplished.

    w/♥
    .:D:.
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