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Reviews for Caleb Danvers the eldest, the golen boy and...

By : AndiKellyDiscombobulated
  • From AdenDiction on June 16, 2010
    Oh. My. Dear. GOD!!! That was simply...ORGASMIC! Holy Hell fire! I came looking for a good story about the boys, and you not only delivered, you blew my mind!

    NEVER STOP WRITING

    Aden Diction
    -!-Addiction-!-
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  • From ANON - Merr. on April 09, 2010
    Well, it was pretty good, but you need paragraphs. It's not only just one paragraph, it's riddled with run-ons and errors. There is even one part where you put 'read' instead of 'Reid'.

    If your author's note at the bottom was spaced out, then your story should have been spaced out. It doesn't seem like the website's fault in this instance.
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  • From ANON - RazorbladeKisses on October 25, 2009
    OH MY HOLY HELL!!! That was damned sexy.
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  • From mylifeisfree on August 15, 2009
    I really enjoyed this story!
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  • From ANON - Tatyana on July 12, 2008
    This is like one big run on sentance. You should use paragraphs, to make reading a bit easier on the eyes. Other than that, your story is hot.
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