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Reviews for The Tracker

By : Firesblood
  • From Ehlonna on September 06, 2013
    More!
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  • From ANON - Sayuri on March 27, 2013
    NOOOOO!!!! I came to the last chapter you have uploaded and I'm devastated by there being no more!! Q___Q

    Awesome story btw. Poor Nyx..she needs lovin' from both the Yautja males, lol :3
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  • From ANON - Joanna on December 14, 2012
    Hermosa tu historia sigue asi apenas puedas muchos abrazos desde Uruguay
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  • From ANON - Kyradda on May 09, 2011
    Wow...This story is amazing.I love all the detail you put into it. I am curious as to what paya is going to do with Nix.
    Can't wait for more and great work!!!

    From Kyradda.

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  • From ANON - ZombieGirl on July 21, 2010
    This is a marvellous story, and I've enjoyed it very much so far. You've done a great job, I think, making it genuine: things are smelly and messy when they should be, embarrassing and touching when they should be. I LOVE that the main human character is badass but still female: it always disappoints me when characters (or people) conflate badassery with masculinity.

    I love, too, that restraint is a problem for the Yautja. Not that it isn't for us, here in real life, but of course the thing that is wonderful about Predators is that they are very powerful; giving them a weakness--a weakness that would be very shameful to a human--makes them gorgeously complex characters. Although Nyx hasn't yet been in a position to fully grasp the situation, Zazin's and Li'ct-ha's lives have kind of exploded in their faces ever since the hunt involving her, and the fact that both Yautja are concerned about this in completely different ways humanizes them. In the literary sense, I mean, not in the taxonomic.

    Anyway, I've enjoyed this story enormously, and I think it's very well written in terms of characterization, description, and verisimilitude. I'd love to read more of it, but even if it's not one that you're planning to continue writing, thanks for a great fic all the same.

    Yours sincerely,

    J.


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  • From memellowchick on February 13, 2010
    I LOVE THIS STORY! I really an excited to see a new chapter
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  • From ANON - Mandy Reel on November 27, 2009
    I love this story. please write more chapters
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  • From ANON - HHunter on November 16, 2009
    This story is one of the more beautiful ones I've read. It's not just a story filled with lust but, rather, about love. The interaction between the two yautja and Nix as well as the yautjas' restraint clearly shows how much they value their female companion.

    I am eagerly looking forward to the next chapter. However, in saying that, please do not rush. I'm in the middle of writing my first story and can understand the difficulties in keeping up with posting chapters frequently. Take your time, a good story like yours would be worth the wait.
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  • From DeathGodDist on October 03, 2009
    Wow. I am just so happy and relieved that you came back to continue this story. I thought for sure that it was not gonna happen, and from what you mentioned about your RL, that would have been quite understandable.

    Well, big major kudos to you. I can now once again look forward to more with this wonderful tale!

    Even though the chapter was short, I still loved it and enjoyed how you managed to resolve the conflict from the cliffhanger. I was a bit suprised that Blade kept his head on straight as he did, given that I thought he too might have been affected by Nyx. But I guess he was of a far greater consitution than little "Teddy". Poor guy, he can't catch a break now. I wonder if he will be able to control himself in the future?

    Once again, so happy to see you back. Will definitely follow this one once again very closely. You rock!

    -DGD
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  • From bluearmysniper on September 29, 2009
    OH MY GOD!! This is seriously a HOT story. I hope you can update soon. I'm surprised Nix hasn't given in to the urges. I mean, Isn't that why "Paya" placed her there and gives her those dreams. Hmmm I truly hope there is more of this!! Have fun!!
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  • From bloodravyn on September 27, 2009
    twas well worth the wait, at least
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  • From bloodravyn on August 19, 2009
    pLEASE update this again soon!
    this is incredible!
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  • From ANON - Helix on March 14, 2009
    I love this story. You are an excellent writer! Please update soon, I'm dying to know what happens.
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  • From DeathGodDist on November 16, 2008
    Re-read the whole thing over the weekend. I definitely noticed a lot more than when I first read through each chapter. I think it is a different experience reading everything one after the other than one chapter spread out at a time. Again, the level of detail in your descriptions is awesome. Nix is a great character and I am really enjoyed learning about her and seeing how she can/will adapt to each situation.

    Oh yeah, this is a mean cliffhanger you're currently leaving us with :P. And so much for Blade just wanting to be more of a "protective" figure for her, as he's clearly fallen head over heels for her as well as Li-ct'ha, though he's better at hiding it.

    Again, can't wait for more. Hope you'll continue soon. :)
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  • From Vyper on November 11, 2008
    Yo still waiting. Are you updating? It is a great story so far and believe me people want you to keep going.
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