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Reviews for So We're Driving Around

By : scandalmonger
  • From Tommyknocker on October 27, 2010
    So, I rarely review stories nowadays. I'm mostly a lurker, sometimes for laziness, often not because the story I'm reading isn't good but it just didn't really capture my interest enough to bother with leaving a review...

    But when I read THIS story, I knew I couldn't just read and then just close the window. This really is something else.

    Maybe it's for your portrayal of Mr.Blonde, which really fascinated me. Maybe it's because of the characterization of Mr.Orange/Freddy, which was really intense and realistic, detailed but (and this takes skill) without being "too long". Sometimes I find myself skipping paragraphs in stories just to get to the smut, because they start to bore me; that didn't happen here.

    The sex scene is where you could have failed; sometimes, even when the rest of the story is interesting, sex scenes will seem trite and repetetive; this, too, didn't happen here, because both the actual sex and Freddy's thought came across as very intense and realistic, and they actually had some originality.
    I loved the dub-con aspect of it, the "want-but-yet-do-not-want" confusion. It's not a clichéd rape-turns-into-pleasure scene or anything like that...instead it's gradual and conflicted, and you can really relate to that, it's all very human.

    I'm saying all this because I think this story is a little gem, well-worth spending some time to comment it, and I don't often find myself thinking this of a fanfiction.
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  • From ANON - bah on May 27, 2009
    WOW! I love it! I just saw the film , on tv, and I realized that freddy and mr blonde would be really hot together! I wish for more!

    I really enjoyed how they staid in charater, and how the fic progressed! LoVe!
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  • From Enyo on April 17, 2009
    Damn, that was good!!!!!
    Liked how you seized Mr.Orange's character and developped. ;)
    Although, I might have to say that having been in Freddie's place I wouldn't have skipped on the offer of the pinning into the matress. Mhmm, Mr. Blonde. Sexy man.
    Look forward to reading more from you.^^
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