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Reviews for A Destiny of Pain

By : angela9in
  • From shiralyndee on January 29, 2011
    WOW!!!Such a well done story. I wonder if after Hephastions death if the Alexander in your story thought about all of the selfish pain that he put Hephastion through?
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  • From Jachy on April 26, 2008
    That was a rather bitter sweet ending, eh? Anyway, I thought you did a rather good job with it. The only thing I'd say to work on is to avoid using modern-day dialogue for 'Alexander'. Like when Alexander would use the word 'baby' with Hephaistion, it just felt out of place with the rest of the story. Other than that I enjoyed this very much. =]
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  • From Cassander on April 17, 2008
    I really enjoyed reading your story from beginning to end. Its very dark and raw. I love it and can't wait to read anymore that you post in the future. Nice website by the way. Very Cool.
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