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Reviews for An Eye for an Eye, A Kiss for a Kiss

By : AddictedToJack
  • From ANON - great kisser on September 30, 2008
    Great job on this one and I can't wait for the reason to be revealed.What could possibly be his excuse?Dunno...Simple answer?It cracks my head!
    Does your sister publish here or elswhere?I'd love to read more of her stuff!She's damn good!

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  • From LizzieSwan on September 28, 2008
    A funny one. Jack and Lizzie are fully in character. Bravo! And the description of 'swiming Jack'-very impressive! And I liked the hint about 'the innocent Lizzie' being in ol'Jack's company;).
    I like your writing and the tension you create between those two. And I realy love your nickname.
    Keep going-great work!

    PS: I "discovered" a song-I don't know if it's your taste, but for me the text is Killing:Kelly Clarkson - Addicted :)


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  • From ANON - Fate on September 24, 2008
    mmmmm... captian jack sparrow.. all alone in the warm blue water.. and he's by himsel because? *looks over at lizzie* there something wrong wit this picuture.. lol :P as usall another great chapter.. write more soon.. :)
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  • From Jacksfavoritewench on September 22, 2008
    How typically Jack! I loved it...can't wait for the next chapter!

    JackSparrowsWench
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  • From ANON - Fate on September 20, 2008
    this story is very addicting.. i hope you know that.. :) anyway.. yay for new chapter! very good.. write more soon!
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  • From ANON - great kisser on September 18, 2008
    This story rocks!I loved Jack's breakfast and his fantasy...Why didn't he punish her in the end?Cruel,wicked pirate!
    Write more,I'll be checking!
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  • From LizzieSwan on September 16, 2008
    "'My goodness,'Lizziebeth!Why should you mention the whelp?You are spoiling the atmosphere!"
    Ooooh yeees-NO whelp. Fantastic! And I'm dying for an interesting swim...;)
    Bring up the goods soon luv!
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  • From ANON - Nionio on September 16, 2008
    WOW! Jack is yummy!!!! I love that guy and he's so true in this story!God,I envy Liz.
    She's a lucky one.
    Your story is absolutely marvelous,fascinating,sexy,charming and piratey.
    Please keep writing!
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  • From Jacksfavoritewench on September 16, 2008
    Yay I loved it! Very cute...loved the sparrytale...it was definitely Jack! Can't wait for the next chapter!

    JackSparrowsWench
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  • From ANON - Fate on September 07, 2008
    I've been reading your story for a while now.. and its very good.. you have alot talent... write more soon...


    *Fate*
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  • From tinamonic on September 03, 2008
    Hey dumpling!!! I LOVED IT!!! VERY, VERY CUTE!!! The Italian poem you used did fit Jack! I've always thought of Jack being fluent in other languages besides English! Besides, he had to learn other languages so that he could shag any woman he wants! Great JOB!!!
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  • From Jacksfavoritewench on September 01, 2008
    I absolutely loved the new chapters!! Yes definitely continue this story...I love it!

    JackSparrowsWench
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  • From ANON - susie869 on August 29, 2008
    You are a wonderful writer, Please update soon, had to have 2 cigs after those 2 chappies... whew...

    Keep up the good work!

    Kudos!

    Susie
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  • From PrincessofthePearl on August 28, 2008
    I love this story! I hope you continue soon!

    Great chapter and keep up the good work!
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  • From Jacksfavoritewench on August 16, 2008
    Nicely done.....I LOVED it! Very steamy sex scene between Jack and Liz...keep up the great work! Can't wait for the next chapter!

    JackSparrowsWench
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