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Reviews for Dark Stop

By : JChat
  • From fairietayle on March 15, 2009
    Very impressive. I love the conflicting feelings. The bitterness and the hate, Layla's jealousy and Will's and Warren's love and dedication to each other, the way they are so gentle and loving together but completely unforgiving to Layla. It's just great, amazing and delicious.
    And I totally love EvilManipulativeBastard!Warren. He's so precious. Especially because he makes a 180 turn when it comes to Will.

    Your flow was good, once again. And the way you wrote some parts... It was like poetry. Like Warren's revolving door of love-life. I love the way you put that.
    And even though I can't imagine people caring that much about the retaionship between Layla, Will and Warren or the reason's why they broke up, it's easy to blame it all on high school. You made it believable enough.

    Awesome work, girlie! ^-^
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  • From ANON - Mary Jane on January 29, 2008
    No offense, but you ruined it with the chick.
    Girls are gross.
    This was my favourite story too...

    You can redeem yourself with a continuation of the one without Layla.
    But that's just my own humble opinion.
    If you don't like it then you don't have to listen to me.
    I just thought that since you are so awesome I had to tell you honestly what I thought.
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  • From sxpoisongirlxs on January 24, 2008
    Oh, and I do love the dark Warren, and I don't think its that OOC... He has an ever present dark side that he suppresses... at least, thats what I think.
    - M
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  • From sxpoisongirlxs on January 24, 2008
    Yet again, we recieve another example of your brilliance. Your work is excellent, and no matter which way you write a character it fits with them well. Amazing job here.

    - M
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  • From ANON - Sancta on January 24, 2008
    Huffs, I want to say I Don't like it, but I LOVE all of your work... so even when I wanted to stop I had to keep reading, had finish it. I understand manipulative Layla... I just think she's too dumb to pull it off, hence why she failed so miserably. I love dark Warren and sub Will, but I can't see Will breaking his good boy routine even if Slutty Layla was begging for it. I'm torn honestly. Other then that, the plot, the momentum of events, everything else, was perfect as can be...
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  • From ANON - Tiff on January 24, 2008
    OMG, I don't like the mean Warren he kind of scares me. But the story was okay. I like that thought of all three of them together just not with Warren being an asshole. But I could see that Warren wouldn't want to share someone he was with. I don't think I'd like to share someone I loved with anyone...If I had someone like Warren that is. I never did much care for Will but I do love Warren and Layla are my favorite characters. Thanks for sharing this story, it was really good.

    ~Tiff
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  • From ANON - Bitsy Glitter on January 24, 2008
    You weren't kidding; this really was dark, and really unsettling!! Your ability to evoke emotions in your readers through your writing is brilliant.

    I never thought I would say this ever but, Warren Peace. What a bastard!! How dare he treat Layla like that!! Just who does that young man think he is!! Lol I got really angry with him. I know you said he was OOC but I find that more so because he is with Will, the anger, hatred and need for control is something I could associate with him.

    I always want to feel happy for people who find their sole mates but I really felt for Layla in stead. I really felt her loneliness and humiliation. The way she is allowing them to treat her because she feels that it is all she has, nearly made me cry. I just want to give her a hug, sit her down with a nice wee cup of tea, and tell her everything is going to be ok!!

    After some contemplation and asking, why Warren Why?!!!! This fic kind of reminded me of the movie, ‘A bugs life’ because of how the grasshoppers treated the ants lol. In that Layla has more power than she thinks and Warren knows and hates that, he's afraid of it. That is why he is, I guess, bullying her and putting her down, to make sure she never realises how easily she could destroy his happiness. Something that he feels he has taken a long time to find.

    I still think she should get together with Magenta and Freeze girl and kick his little arse up and down Maxville, see how he likes being manipulated for a change!! Hahahahahaa
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