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Reviews for A Union of Convenience (Formerly ‘Alone’)

By : Keen

From ANON - Juliemdashf on March 08, 2014
I love this story SOO much!!! It is amazeballs. It would be awesome if you could send me the story you mentioned at the bottom. Where is explains Arah and the whistler etc etc. Anyways, If you could send me the whole story together I wouls love it as well. Its kinda hard to read on this site and would love it in another format. Please keep me posted if you are writing any other Yautja related stuff I'd love to read more of your work. THANKS !!!
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From ANON - Sayuri-Yuuko on March 29, 2013
Oops, didn't see the sequel you already had up. My bad! But you obviously must have had a lot of reviewers asking for it so I guess no surprise there. ;)
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From ANON - Sayuri-Yuuko on March 29, 2013
WHY?! Why do they have to be so stubborn as mules?! AGH!! I can't handle all these feels!

Why did you have to make such a good story?! Why? I am so in love with this story. Amazing that such a good story could be found and is one of the rare few to not have a happy ending. Surprisingly I find myself pissed off at this...Are you willing to do a sequel? This is just absolutely amazing and well written. :)
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From ANON - beliefinkakashi on January 05, 2011
I loved the first ending.... I erased the second one from my memory.... Its too f-ing sad.
Great story, I loved it. I expected her to die... Especially with a Xenomorph inside her....
Love to read more of your work!
Good luck.
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From Kurokajin on February 19, 2009
I hope that I can remember to say all that I wanted to say ^^. The start to your story was so perfect, immedietely I was captured. The way you present the characters, and introduce them and thier stories throughout your writing is very evolved. You let evrything unravel at a good pace. Literally, I was kept from my seat by your writings. I had to pace my house and come back later from the excitment, suspence, and laughter. There were so many moments that had me cracking at the seams. Its very amusing when your driving down the road or at the bank and you cant help but giggle aloud remembering a funny part from a great fic. I think that your story definetly qualifies as an 'Epic' fic. Every fandom has fics that have such a presence and command that they become infamous, legendary. To me your fic is one of those. I think I will always remember it, even when the chracters and the plot fade, I'll remember the essence of your story, and a few others, above all the other hundreds of fanfics I have had the pleasure of reading.

I have a special love for Isis, she has alot of fire. She has both so much physical and mental strength. Stubborn, caring/loving, tough as nails, and wont take crap from anyone! I'm new to Predator fics (a few weeks in), and the trend for the women to be taller than average makes sense and is intruiging to me. I especially had alot of fun with picturing Isis in my head. I love how she is described, an exotic, cooper skined, long curly haired, 6 ft muscled beauty. (6ft unless I manufactured that height. I have a poor memory) I actually went on the net to search for women that could fit that description, because sadly I couldnt imagine a woman like that without seeing 'Big Bertha' lol. I was able to get some really great outlines for my mind. Beautiful fighters (MMA) and a atheletes like Candace Parker, Lisa Leslie, Debi Purcell, Gina Carano, and Lisa king. I was surpised how appealing these althletic women are lol. I could imagine a man getting his ass kicked by them and loving every painful minute of it haha. I can never watch a Bowflex commercial the same way again. Even motivated me to work out a bit more, although I might have to leave that to the pros (My torn hamstring will hopefully be healed in a weeks time lol, no joke). I heardly ever have the privilege to read about dark skined characters (except for Avatar fics ^_^). Being a black woman myself its always a pleasure when I have the opportunity to do so. :D I also found tons of pics of gorgeous tall black models but their body shapes were all wrong for Isis. To skinny, and straight! >=P lol ;)

Ali'shir with all that he has gone through, despite his gruff exterior, has such a vulnerability. All the bad/tragic things that happened in his life. The balance of his strength and his insecurities. Both your characters are prefectly complementary of each other.

There are so many great memorable parts the attempted kamikaze scene when Isis had to step in. Her actions and thoughts as well as Ali’shir amused me to no end. By the end of the story I was uttering 'Oh/Ah, hell' everytime a new conflict arose ^^ lol. I couldnt get enough of Ali and Isis's initial realtionship with all the biting sarcasim, and hostility lol. So funny how they irk every nerve of the other! Although when they become closer that was wonderful. One of my top favorite comedic parts was with Kai and Isis at the dining table, where she called her an animal. Lmao! Isis's reaction and then physical action to that had me out of my seat. XD Also Ali's lil slip of the tongue with Kai at party. That really knocked her down a peg hehe. I wish I could comment on all the parts that I found hilarious, but I might literally end up re-typing the whole thing again. You have a great sense of humor! So subtle it doesnt even seem to be typed with that objective in mind, but it can have my abs sore and a long lasting smile on my face. XD!

Toward the ending of your writing when things began to come to a head, the drama and emotion was so thick. Oh my goodness was all I was able to say. I also made the mistake, in my eagarness to finish the story, of skipping the AN begining of 19. I bawled so hard. It was actually kinda nice, to cry so good. ^_^; It was a very goood thing that someone asked you not to post that chapter as the finale. I might have rioted the streets of my small country downtown lol, jk. I would have enjoyed the orginal ending as well, although I'm happier the goodness gets to continue.

Putting aside my random talk I just want to tell you how much I have enjoyed your stroy. You have a very terriffic, mature writing style. The flow is perfect. The descriptiveness, and depth you put into your chracters and their development really shows. Your story is great. I wish I was more articulate and better versed in criticisms, hopefully I conveyed how much I love your story. (Rambling is a problem for me ^_^)

_|¯|o ◄--- I'm not worthy... I bow in the presence of greatness (-.-) m(_ _)m ◄--- front/head view bowing person
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From XXallthatjazzxX on August 03, 2008
*blink blink*
...Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
;-;
So saaaddddd
Lol, I started to play 'Goodbye To You' by Michelle Branch because I thought it might be appropriate, and then I had to cut it off real fast cause she's ALIVEEEEEE
Omfg, I would have jumped up and down if I could *cracked rib* but I was soooooooooooo happy, omfg
I cannot wait for the sequel, and omfg omfg omfg, eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee I'm excited and sad and in pain all at the same time.
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From DeathGodDist on July 31, 2008
Finally I feel I should review this properly.

But what can I say that hasn't been said? The writing is truly top-knotch and the characters are just superbly thought out. Although, I have to say I don't think I've ever read about a more stubborn couple in my lifetime. These two are clearly meant for eachother yet they get so damn worked up about such trifling things and they never take the time to actually attempt to understand where the other is coming from. Oh well, I guess we'll see more in the sequel.

Also, gotta give props to ending part 1. I never saw that one coming and almost was seriously believing that that was how you were going to end it. Sure fooled me :)
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From midnighteyes on July 31, 2008
I saw the story number 2 and got confused... So i went back and seen you update!!! So i have two chapters now to read!!!!! Girl you are good, so glad to see a part two, you just made my year!!!!!
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From keepmoving on July 31, 2008
I can't tell you how much I loved this! One of the BEST stories I've ever read - and not just in the Predator fandom. You certainly have a knack for writing, and I'm excited for the sequel (which I'm going to go read now!), as well as any other works you come up with :D
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From ANON - Firesblood on July 29, 2008
Wonderful! I loved this chapter. Er...ending. I'm glad that you are continueing. Which one are you continueing by the way? The one where Isis died, or this ending? (I really hope it's this ending.)

I can't wait to read more later! Thank you for updating!
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From ANON - shortest_warrior on July 28, 2008
Jeeze, those pair annoy me sometimes. Why don't they just say how they feel before it truly is too late? ARghhhhhh.

Have I ever told you how much I love this story. I just know the sequel will be just as good. It'd be so cool if Isis ended up on the same planet as Kai, Yash'in and Buddy. I'd so love to see the look on Kai's face when she sees Isis.

Looking forward to your sequel Keenstuff
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From Shyann on July 28, 2008
Man I can't beleive it can't wait for the sequel..
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From DasGrauen on July 28, 2008
Because I haven't any access to Internet I was asking myself what happened to this Story all the time. Yesterday I got a new connection and passed all sunday reading your Story, and I have to say it's awesome. At first I was drooling on my keeboard ( they finally did it), next I was crying my eyes out and now I just want to shake those two for beeing so stupid. And hearing that there will be a sequel makes me so happy that I jump around and giggle like a little Kid XD
If it was for me to rate you would have +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
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From sagikamikazi on July 26, 2008
Ok, first of all *gets up from seat and claps in a one woman standing ovation* MAN was this story ever good!!!!Second of all...
Sequel?!With the two main players?!(ok, now you definitely got me wondering how the hell you're going to manage that one)But how ever you do it, I will be there with bells on , happier than a pig in shit!!!

By the way, this story is now one of my favorite three predator fanfics of all times!*kisses your feet*

Sagikamikazi =3
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From ANON - Captdavyjonesgal on July 19, 2008
i cant beleive u actually killed her!! but this is a wonderfully written story otherwise
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