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Reviews for The Bargain for the Whelp

By : stminority
  • From ANON - Ana-Nahi on August 01, 2008
    Oh my god! Poor Jack! I feel so bad and somehow I feel it's my fault even though that's not even logically possible! Poor poor poor Jack!
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  • From ANON - Love Gaara Of The Sand on July 13, 2008
    I really like your Story....

    What about the rape by Davy Jones... it's a dark passage but I liked the reaction of Will, who beg for Jack...

    And his tear... drop by his eyes the second time... so sad !

    Good job
    LGS
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