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Reviews for Coming of the Gods

By : sagikamikazi
  • From ANON - chancelor22 on August 18, 2008
    LOL, you're most welcome dear. And though I can't smell it over the interwebs, I can read it. And from what I see, it's good. Can't wait for the next chapter. Right now, you are the only one updating. So it you that is keeping me from starving altogether. :D
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on August 14, 2008
    Hm. I just waiting for it to come crashing down on her head. As to how that's gonna happen who knows. Could be the agency sends in more ppl. Could be the Elder figures it out and does...something. Or, it could turn out the way it looks to be heading. Either way it's really good and I can't wait for the next chapter. Glad to see you back and posting! :D
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  • From ANON - Melody on April 10, 2008
    Hey I love the story so far, I hop you update soon!
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  • From Nahaujaret on February 12, 2008
    I really enjoy your work. Please update soon I can't wait to see what will happen next.
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  • From Nahaujaret on January 19, 2008
    I am so glad you updated. Your fic keeps me interested with the two points of view. I can't wait for you to update,thank you.
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on January 12, 2008
    Yay! An update. I'm soo happy to have something to read again. And I loved the pic of the PredAlien with the Hot chick. Very nice. I like the humor at the end of this chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next...
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  • From ANON - Ar'Shiya on January 12, 2008
    I am so proud of you and the way this story is going. Keep up the good work. It really ia looking wonderful..........

    Ar'Shiya
    "LETS' RIDE"
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  • From Nahaujaret on January 09, 2008
    I really like it so far, and can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon.
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  • From AllSpark on January 05, 2008
    Wow, great start, I can't wait to see what will happen next. Update soon
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  • From ANON - kehlan on January 01, 2008
    I like this story and look forward to reading more. however, with all due respect to Joss, he/she is wrong. words are the tools a writer uses to paint a picture and good spelling and grammar make all the difference in improving the readability of the story. Please do not take this as flaming, but your story has potential and would benefit from being spell checked or beta read. I know how difficult it is towrite in a language that is not your own, I've done it and have alot of respect for you for the effort you have made. I beleive in telling the truth in a review. As a writer, I've discovered that people telling me they love the story is great encouragement, but it does not help me to improve. good luck and keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Chancelor22 on January 01, 2008
    Meh, it's not that big of a deal. I mean, you kinda HAVE to end the chapter there. And I did not expect to see any time travel, so kudos to you. Keep up the great work! =D
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  • From ANON - Ar'Shiya on January 01, 2008
    The story is going good, but I need a copy of it to run through microsoft works, the sentences are breaking apart.

    Ar'Shiya
    "LETS' RIDE"
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  • From ANON - Blue Viper on January 01, 2008
    Looks great! Can't wait to see what's next
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 26, 2007
    Yeah, because everyone just loves to read a story stuffed full of ridiculously broken grammar and countless spelling errors... that's truly the core of great writing!
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  • From JossiKun on December 26, 2007
    WOW! i really liked the beginning!^^ this seems like it's going to be an awesome story so please update soon!^^ and don't worry about spelling errors too much, is someone doesn't understand what you mean w/ the sentence, "Running threw(should be through^^) the deep bush to their favorite place", then they must be extremely stupid^^ Besides it doesn't have to be perfect, though improvement is always a good thing^^
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