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Reviews for One Of Us

By : OokamiJudge
  • From Shellbean on September 30, 2023

    Hello,

    This is getting pretty interesting. I am hoping you plan on writing more. I know how that muse or writer's block can be. It's awful! Thanks again for writing. Sincerely, Shellbean:)


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  • From redshark on September 23, 2012
    Not sure if I should write a review for each chapter or not - overall for now, liking the direction this story is going, I'd like to see how the path of the story changes from what the movie. Despite the boys being vampires, it's interesting (and enjoyable) seeing them acting very much like a wolf pack and caring for one another...as well as wanting to chase off the weaklings dragging down the pack. (though I am curious to see where Laddie is in all this). Loving how you're having David fighting to be gentle to Michael....seriously want to see them being rough in the future >:3

    I can't wait to see what else you've got planned for the boys - an update would delight my Lost Boys fix verily, I'll attempt to make a review for each of the chapters in the near future to give better input and thanks to your cleverness~
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  • From Vyper on October 26, 2008
    Interesting, I wonder what will happen to Sam?
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  • From KagetsuAsame on January 11, 2008
    I enjoy it, was happy to see that you updated and I look forward to the next part, keep it up!
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  • From CarolineAnderson on January 08, 2008
    I love this story and can't wait for your next update.lol
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  • From KagetsuAsame on November 10, 2007
    I was very happy to see that you had updated and look forward to what's coming next. Just update when you can, I know all too well about things being distracting.
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  • From ANON - Leia on October 28, 2007
    This is really good, but you really have to watch your spelling and grammer. It's a bit distracting. Apart from that, this is an excellant story!
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  • From Boshomengro on October 22, 2007
    I missed the last update; So I'm reviewing both chapters. Very good both of them! I'm liking where this is heading. Please keep going as this promises to be an excellent story.
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  • From CarolineAnderson on October 21, 2007
    Hey this is cool, you've posted your story on hear to. I hope this means that there will be some wild "fun" added to future chapters...hehehe, anyways i hope you update real soon.lol
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  • From KagetsuAsame on October 18, 2007
    Very interesting, I look forward to the next part and am curious to see where this is going. Keep it up.
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  • From Boshomengro on October 18, 2007
    I like this so far. It's going to be interesting to see what direction you take this in. Looking forward to more.

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