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Reviews for Raw Deal

By : Shalimar
  • From Nahaujaret on July 23, 2007
    This fic is so awesome. I can't help but love every story you add on. I also like how you didn't do the thing where he comes back to get her since she's pregnant. You added a different element to the story that way and I can't wait to see what you do next. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 19, 2007
    Uh-oh! @_@ I hope Chaktou (I know I didn't spell that right) comes to the rescue. *sniff* I guess I just want them back together because I like happy endings...:3
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  • From Kalar on July 16, 2007
    I Love it! Please, please, please make it possible for Kat to return to Yaut with Chak'tou and Nhaw'che. And add more chapters soon. I can't wait.


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  • From AntiDolorifico on July 15, 2007
    You know that I fancy this series a lot, like everything else you write. I am really glad that you posted this part here on AFF, as well. I decided I am going to re-read the whole series again later tonight. Yay... =)

    Also:
    "We have to teach him not to try to eat Aunt Helen’s cats, who are convinced, once he starts walking, that Boyd must be the Antichrist."

    Oh ye gods, that always makes me go into gales of giggles, it's so funny. I can truly imagine a cat's reaction being akin to that. =D

    I know I've begged about this before, but, but, but.... like your fic slightly suggests in one place:
    "One newly sexually mature Yautja male on a planet full of females that smell too good."

    You have no idea how much I'd love for that prediction to come to fruition. I'm not going to whine. Maybe a little. Oh ye gods, woman, PLEASE.
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  • From DeathGodDist on July 15, 2007
    Wow. Your writing is seriously awesome. I really enjoy the creativity behind your characters and how you create such believable interactions between them.

    Boyd is innocently cute, though I wonder how long he will stay that way? I do hope he'll have a happy life, even though that seems unlikely.

    I truly enjoy this series and hope it keeps on going. :)
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  • From Retribution on July 15, 2007
    I am so glad you put this one here as well, was getting ready to post another chapter when I saw it and decided to wait on my chapter. Just didn't have the heart to post over such a wonderful writer.

    Ar'Shiya
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