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Reviews for Night with the Captain

By : DCWyverx
  • From DoomGreen on July 18, 2007
    feel kinda odd pointing this out but...
    Sharks technically have two penises...
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  • From AntiDolorifico on June 27, 2007
    Ahh, I liked this. I like Maccus. And Davy. So this wins in my book. Though maybe you should break the story up in paragraphs, you know? And a completely new line for any dialogue. Just so that it's easier to read. I used to do the same thing, just write a wall of text, tee hee. Just a friendly suggestion though, it's your story to do with what you wish. =) I've long hoped that someone would write something featuring Maccus, and here it is. Thank you.
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