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Reviews for How to Love a Ghost

By : CallousDisregard
  • From ANON - swirling dreams on November 28, 2007
    OMG! I WANT HIM TO "BEND HER OVER AND FUCK HER SENSELESS!" THERE NEEDS TO BE, ( if u were not planning it otherwise) SOME GOOD RAPE DAVY JONES STORIES ON HERE, U SHLD DO THAT! BUT THAT WAS REALLY GOOD! PLS UPDATE SOON!
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  • From CaptDavyJonesLover on July 17, 2007
    i'd like to find that out myself...or even over the pipe organ in his chambers..the possibilities are endless...keep it up mate
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  • From MrsJones on July 06, 2007
    it's a pretty good start. i'd like to see where you go with this. i think my username says it all...i just love these kinds of stories, as long as there's a happy ending for my sexy cephalopod!
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  • From ANON - brenda on June 23, 2007
    i like this chapter better than the one you had before but i there one was good too tough. please update soon
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  • From CaptDavyJonesLover on June 19, 2007
    keep it up, you were very ebil for making us think u updated.
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  • From ANON - Jem on June 19, 2007
    Actually Disney doesn't own the song lyrics. Loreena McKennitt does. Remember to mention that as well in your disclaimers ;) Other than that: This looks very promising, though you should have merged the two chapters into one rather than jumping back and forth in the timeline for such short bits and pieces. And don't bother writing "Flashback!" Start the flashback with "He remembered how she had first appeared a 100 years ago" or something like it. In the middle of a chapter in a book you don't see a headline with the word Flashback in the midst of it all. It breaks the flow of the story and detracts from the reading experience :) A ghostly OFC is new to me. I'm looking forward to seeing where you're planning on going with this :)
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  • From ANON - brenda on June 19, 2007
    keep on with the story. its really good. update soon please!! ;]
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  • From CaptDavyJonesLover on June 18, 2007
    k, i like it so far, keep it up. i hate Calypso
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  • From ANON - KateM. on June 18, 2007
    Sounds good so far!
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  • From ANON - brenda on June 18, 2007
    i like the story please continue i would to read what happens between the girl and davy jones lol
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