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Reviews for The Flying Dutchman

By : BrethlessM
  • From TheSlytherinPhoenix on April 11, 2016
    I need more... is there more?!
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  • From FreeSpiritedOne on January 16, 2008
    WOW! I LOVED this! I should have reviewed each chapter, but I could not bring myself to break the narrative. I laughed, I cried, I fell in love with a kid (which I generally cannot stand as OFCs). Your interpretation of Jack was spot on which is rare. Thank you for including the story of the Dutchman at the end. It was evident throughout how elegantly you made use of it. I deeply enjoyed this story and if I didn't have to go to work tomorrow I would be reading the sequel right now.

    Cheers, Free
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 22, 2007
    312
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  • From Emeraldfires on August 25, 2007
    Really awesome fic!!! Best POTC fic to date!
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  • From ANON - howlongmustiwait on August 03, 2007
    EEEEP. The last part of chapter two isn't there! Where did it go? Very emotional chapter. You can really feel her pain.
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  • From phantomcupcake42 on July 31, 2007
    Wonderful. I adore this story whole-heartedly. Often times I dislike children added to the plot, especially, when I'm a Sparrabeth shipper and thats wills son. But I must say little William is adorable and I have grown to love him. I'm so excited to read the sequel!
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  • From angelnomiko on July 19, 2007
    wow that was awsome ... later for now

    angel
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  • From UndeadMonkey on July 14, 2007
    I cried! I saw on the J/E board the sequel to this so decided to read first. By God, it was AMAZING! Im going to read the sequel now!
    x x x x
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  • From ANON - Stephanie on July 14, 2007
    I have absolutely fallen in love with the story. Finallly someone acknoledges Elizabeth's struggle between Will and Jack. Most people just totally forget about Will and thrust Jack and Elizabeth together. Granted, I do prefer that pairing because I just find the character of Will to be way too uptight, but that's besides the point. I just adore the intelligent writing and you don't normally find on here. Snogging is nice, but I definitely prefer a plot first and you captured that beautifully. You've managed to show the sexual frustration between Elizabeth and Jack but neither ever act on it, besides that one kiss. I just hope the sequal is as amazing as this one.

    Stephanie
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  • From KiwiGirl on July 14, 2007
    Well I just read this through from start to finish. I really like how your explained Jack's relationship with Beckett and the depths that you had with Jack. He has so many faces and depths that go beyond the facade that he puts on for the world to see.

    I was crying reading of Will and Elizabeth's reunion, I could see it all so clearly. Well done with that.

    The ending was unexpected...and sad. I like Elizabeth her spirit and her courage and I could imagine her doing this.

    Great story and I am looking forward to reading the continuation...
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  • From freelke on July 12, 2007
    Hope you had a nice trip. I hope that you are well rested and your head is clear to start the sequel. Vacations are always nice.
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  • From fortunesque on July 07, 2007
    I loved that ending. I'm not mad or upset; it was perfect.
    And oh the sequel is going to be incredible. I can sense it.
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  • From freelke on July 07, 2007
    it was so sad, but such a great story I can overlook that. I am already looking forward to the next story, where things will end much more to my liking :) I am sad this story is over but it was exciting and suspenseful every step of the way. Will the next story be a true sequel ( a continuaton of their journey after this one ) ora new plot where jack and elizabeth are the main characters? I really like William ( the little one) and I hope he is in the next story, I like the idea of Jack as a father. I can't wait till the next story is up, I'll check beore I go to work on MOnday. No need to rush , I have been working on my patience :)


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  • From Naira on July 07, 2007
    Hey...

    I want another update :P not final nuhuh :p
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  • From freelke on July 06, 2007
    I think I might die! Ive been checking all day. I can't wait until the final chapter is posted. I'm sure it will be great
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