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Reviews for White and Black Pearls 1 - Seven Pearls

By : wingless
  • From clarediva on June 19, 2007
    Great fic! it really racked up the suspense and tension all the way to the cliffhanger ending - I'm off to read #2 as soon as I can *LOL*. I liked the way you developed Jack's character, I felt the movies had made it more of a caricature, so you filled in many of the gaps there. And the interaction between all the characters was great - the sisters, Jack and Celeste, and Davy Jones and Celeste particularly. The interludes with Will were good to keep the tale flowing, so that it didn't feel too much like storytelling, but something the reader felt involved in. Nice bits of wit and humour too, and pirate action!!!! Thanks for sharing ^___^
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  • From akume on June 10, 2007
    You so have me at the edge of my seat with that cliffhanger. Please, oh please upload the sequel soon. I want to know what happened to Jack.
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  • From akume on June 10, 2007
    That was a moving piece. I bet the others will be just as well. Until next time.
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  • From akume on June 10, 2007
    Such a sad story. I can't wait for the following chapters. Until then.
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