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Reviews for Gasping for Air

By : astsweetheart18
  • From AddictedToJack on December 16, 2008
    Poor Jack,poor Lizzie.They should meet! If not ,they will both go crazy from these dreams.
    Please update as soon as you can.This is so addicting^^.
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  • From AddictedToJack on December 16, 2008
    so short!Write longer chapters please.it's so good.Do they share same dreams actually? Keep going!!!
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  • From AddictedToJack on December 16, 2008
    You scared me so much this time! Didn't expect another,even worse nigtmare.^^ Keep goin',lv.I like it.
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  • From AddictedToJack on December 16, 2008
    Oh dear god! I thought that he killed her! Whew... just a nightmare:)
    I definitely developed an interest in this fic.Great writing!
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  • From ANON - mary on December 09, 2008
    Great chapter!!!I love it!!!Please update soon.
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  • From Jacksfavoritewench on November 18, 2008
    Wow....wonderfully written so far!! Can't wait for the next chapter dear!!

    JackSparrowsWench
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  • From LizzieSwan on December 09, 2007
    So far, so good! Great! Please I need more ;)...

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  • From UndeadMonkey on August 25, 2007
    Glad to see you updated. Im curious to see where these dreams lead. Are the two going to meet up again, will Jack end up killing Lizzie? Can she atone for her mistakes? Will he believe her? Update update update! I'm looking forward to the rest of this story.
    x x x x
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  • From ANON - Leanne on August 25, 2007
    PLEASE keep going!!!! its nice to know that Jack doesn't want to do that...I hope they meet...even though it so dark and violent...its also amazing...but they are just dreams..and anyways my main point....PLEASE KEEP WRITING THIS STORY!!
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  • From ANON - Leanne on August 23, 2007
    I'm loving the hatred and forced kisses, and the regrets!!!! please update, I've been checking everyday only to find only 2 chapters...again...I know you won't dissapoint!!! amazing story!!!
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  • From ANON - Persia on June 07, 2007
    Oy! More please! How deliciously sadistic!
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  • From SassySparrow on June 06, 2007
    Poor Lizzie! That was really a dark dream. And you should continue that one - Lizzie and Jack deserve a better end - a happy end!
    Thanks for sharing it with us readers.
    Take care,
    ~Saskia~
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  • From DesiringPirates on June 05, 2007
    Ohhh... that was good. And scary. And I love Jack's parting line, that was brilliant!
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