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Reviews for Star Wars: Dark Jedi Order

By : Jarkota
  • From ANON - Master Leitch on July 12, 2012
    Greetings Master Jarkota, I was impressed by your story. Im sorry to hear that you will no longer be writing this story due to lack of interest and reviews. I found myself drawn into this storyline and would love for you to continue. May the Force continue to guide you.

    Master Leitch
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  • From Jarkota on June 18, 2008
    Well, Archfiend, it's funny you should mention this. About a week ago, I decided to try and pick this story up again. Gonna have to rewrite what little I had of chapter 2 ("Dark Hunter"), but it's not going to be as long a chapter as this one was. (And if you end up liking both chapters, you'll be pleased with what I have planned for the final installment, "Dark vengeance".)
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  • From Archfiend on June 18, 2008
    Why oh why did you decide to abandon this epic story? I read this story so far and I was moved the way you managed to span ahuge story arc across space and time.I know that it is ver unlikely of you to continue with this story but I deraly hope, you will do so. Wh you have no reviews and so few hits is unexplainable to me, as this story is breathtaking. You actually managed to write a story that fits in the star wars universer, (though I am not sure about the ancestry of Kyle Katarn) nonetheless, this story actually has the potential to be canon, I mean it is nearly on par with the books, so please, please take up the story again, and I will promise you I will review every chapter of yours that you post. About the time line I´m not quite sure but I did some arithmetics and it`d mean that Kyle`s ancestor awakens 20ABY meaning that there is peace with the Imperial Remnant and Mara jade has become Mara Jade Skywalker. I hope you can implement that somehow,that is of course if you continue, ut try one more time to continue the story and you might get more hits. Right now your story is on a back page, due to it`s lack of update, so you will get very few hits on it in it`s current state. I only found it, because I visited your Author`s page where you mentioned it. Also the length of the chapter might be a reason why many tried to read it and then fled, as the chapter is extremely long, and while I like to read very long chapter many do not, so if you split your chapter into two or three smaller ones (just edit them, by reposting part of the chapter as a new chapter and erase the rest of the chapter), you`ll surely get more reviews then, and post them like one chapter per day or week, thereby giving people a chance to read the story so far in it`s completion and to leave reviews. I hope I have been of assistance and that you will read this huge post. (blimey got longer and longer, just like your story huh)
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