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By : WantedRedhead
  • From AceSpades on July 04, 2008
    i liked it. update soon please cant wait to see what happens next.
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  • From freelke on June 10, 2007
    I really liked this chapter. Please get another one up soon. It keeps to character but keeps it interesting and original.
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  • From PrimitiveScrewhead on May 12, 2007
    i love how you write Barbossa. He's such a bastard but he's smart as a whip. :D

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  • From SassySparrow on May 11, 2007
    Yes! They're almost reunited! :o) I wonder how Jack'll react at her.....
    Please keep up your excellent work - I love it!
    Take care,
    ~Sassy~
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  • From JMaX on May 10, 2007
    Great work with this story. Good use of the trailers. You do however, need a beta. Just simple mistakes that would be easily caught by a second pair of eyes. Constructive not critical.

    Keep up the great storytelling!
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  • From Femmevixen13 on May 10, 2007
    Lovely chapter! It was written very beautifully. I'm so glad that Liz passed the test and persevered through the threat of death. Yay they've found Jack!! Can't wait for more!
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  • From Femmevixen13 on May 01, 2007
    Oooh, this chapter was great! I love the idea of the windrose, very original. Can't wait for the next one! ;D
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  • From jackspeapod on May 01, 2007
    wow - very interesting chapter!
    Hope you'll update soon mate - like your story very much!

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  • From JMaX on April 29, 2007
    Great start! Do please continue!
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  • From Femmevixen13 on April 29, 2007
    Excellent start to the story! Can't wait for more!
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  • From tinamonic on April 28, 2007
    I absolutely loved it! I cannot wait for more! Update soon!
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