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Reviews for River Falls

By : jemstone5
  • From jectex57 on September 01, 2011
    I read all of this series and really enjoyed them. This one does not seem as though it is finished, but could end where you left it. I did notice some spelling errors in all, though some could be explained as typos. There were also some words that were the right sounding but the wrong spelling.
    All in all a most enjoyable series.
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  • From CLTexas84 on January 22, 2011
    Will this ever be updated? I read it all the time
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  • From gengala12 on January 07, 2011
    I have just finished reading every single one of your stories and I want you to know that they are FANTASTIC!! I absolutely love your writing style and skills and think that you should work on a book of your own, if you haven't already. =)
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  • From Aimzy on September 05, 2007
    Great chapter, jem! I was so excited to see that my suspicions about the smallest baby turned out to be true. I just love M'Pa, and it's great to see him get his heart's desire with El. I'm also very glad you didn't make us wait too long to find out the truth, lol. Looking forward to the next chapter- hope it will be SOON! :D
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  • From DeathGodDist on August 31, 2007
    Ah, still quite an enjoyable story. I kind of figured that was the case with that one fussy child being M'Pa's, great dialogue as usual between all the characters. Oh, and nice to see a follow up with one of the human girls who came along back in Book 2, guess she's starting to learn her place, I wonder how the other one is doing? I wouldn't mind reading about their experiences becoming accustomed to their new environment.

    Again, great job, I hope you'll continue :)
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  • From littlemissy1503 on August 30, 2007
    so glad that m'pa has a child. can't wait for more.
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  • From CaptDavyJonesLover on August 30, 2007
    aww i think im gonna cry...keep it up!!!
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  • From DeathGodDist on July 15, 2007
    Props to Tyler, taking one for the team literaly. Poor Trivet being taunted by Kal too :)

    I'm curious as to what's so suprising at the door, can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From Aimzy on July 12, 2007
    Great chapter, jemstone! I was so happy to see El and M'Pa have a chance to talk alone. Can't wait to see when they get a chance to do more than just talk...if ya know what I mean... *nudge nudge* LOL I love this possessive side of M'Pa, btw. I think it shows the depth of the bond he's forming with El. I also have a theory about the smallest baby, and I'm hoping it turns out to be true and that we get to find out soon. Please, PLEASE update soon! *fingers crossed*


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  • From MuseofScrolls on July 06, 2007
    Such a sweet chapter; Kal being able to retrieve Aubrey's furniture; El naming her babies and also comforting M'Pa. I just love it, jemstone. ^_^ Cannot wait for the next installment.
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  • From CaptDavyJonesLover on July 05, 2007
    awesome, keep it up!! what do they see???
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  • From littlemissy1503 on July 05, 2007
    oh, please tell me there will be more....still enjoying this story very much.
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  • From littlemissy1503 on June 17, 2007
    Ver’On purred to the baby in his arms, surprised that it hissed back at him. M’Pa chuckled. “He’s challenging you for his independence already,” he chided. Ver’On purred even deeper, as the babies M’Pa was holding began to coo to the sound.
    I think Ver'on is holding M'pa child and M'pa is holding Ver'on children. It would be good for everyone that way.
    Really enjoying this story hope you update soon.
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  • From JulieL on June 07, 2007
    Great Chappie Jem.

    Poor M'Pa. To feel that way and to have one of the pups hiss at him. Not good. I kind of wonder though when one of the pups hissed at Ver'On. HHHMmmmm. But I'm very glad El's going to be okay.

    I hope Kal doesn't run into any trouble when he returns to get the table setting.

    Loved J-on's line. "Oops, wrong one."
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  • From DeathGodDist on June 07, 2007
    lol, the first time I checked this update, I completely missed chapter 3 :) What a mistake, cause that scene at the end was HOT!

    Looks like M'Pa is starting to feel worse about his position, I wonder where this will lead?

    Keep writing, you're so good! :)
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