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By : BaronNomaw
  • From ANON - talwyn on October 21, 2008
    AWESOME story! I knew she had it in her to be bad. ;)
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  • From megf212 on July 14, 2007
    I loved every bit of it. Fantastic!
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  • From PrimitiveScrewhead on July 11, 2007
    had to come back and read this again. :D squee... i love this fic.
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  • From LaurenGraceJurious on July 03, 2007
    Whoa! It is about time that someone saw the potential in a character like Barbossa, and then displayed it as well as you have! I am now so totally hooked on B/E, and it's all thanks to your incredible story! Please keep writing! I wish this were a movie! I'm a Sparrabether, and it was getting just a tish bit stale...but this...WOW! (By the way, if you like, check out my J/E story "In The Nick of Time" or my Sleepy Hollow story, "The Inner Beast"...I think you see Barbossa the way I saw the Hessian in Sleepy Hollow, and that's why I enjoy your story so much!) Again, please keep writing...and I'm just dying to know what you see when you're writing these sex scenes, what does Barbossa's body look like? I love that this thing between he and Elizabeth goes beyond physical, but how about Lizzie, what's she appreciate about him physically? Oh, (I've just got so much to say about your story!)if you haven't had the pleasure of watching Geoffrey Rush in "Quills,", then you MUST do so!

    Again, wonderful story! Let's here it for a sequel! Barbossa should "ride" again!;-)
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  • From ANON - Mrs Vachs on June 28, 2007
    Really liked the story! Those two were the real love story of 'Pirates'. Any more you wanna write, I'll be glad to read. :D
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  • From ANON - Lauren on June 04, 2007
    This fic was absolutely amazing, and although a little out of character for Elizabeth (to say the least) it was written exactly how I imagined their relationship could have been. Barbosa, while bereft of the boyish good looks of Orlando is dangerously sexy and you write him so. I hope if you write another one, and you should, he is the star. Thanks for the great read. ~Lauren
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  • From Jags on June 02, 2007
    I liked it. A lot!
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  • From ANON - Zariva on May 31, 2007
    I really enjoyed this story and will definitely check out your other stuff! Well done!
    Hope there'll be more stuff to read about Hector from you in the future ;)
    Rive
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  • From ABoxFullOfSharpObjects on May 23, 2007
    This was a bit of a conundrum for me. Firstly, I intensely dislike Elizabeth. But I really like Barbossa. Maybe moreso than Jack. Imagine my sitting here, trying to decide whether or not to brave it. Trying to figure out which was greater; my fondness for Barbossa or my dislike of Elizabeth. Nonetheless, I chose to read. And I handled it well. =) I didn't feel the normal revulsion for Liz. And Barbossa was just fine as far as character goings. I mean, he's not evil. He's just a pirate. And very, very good at being one.

    Your sex scenes were nicely done. I'm always impressed and tend to take a story more seriously when they don't use crude terminology for body parts. Well done.

    Now then. There's the matter of the lack of Barbossa fictions and Anarmaria fictions. I really liked your lemons. Do you see where this is going? =) Perhaps you or I could come up with something. >D
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  • From GeorgieFain on May 12, 2007
    ..... come to me feeling as if you’ve just finished with me .....

    *swoon*




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  • From GeorgieFain on May 12, 2007
    you know...this makes my second reading of this story and I guess it's because I'm bored and needing some 'intrique'. I really like elizabeth and barbossa together. it's good stuff. yum. you DO need to write more of it, girl.


    Georgie


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  • From GeorgieFain on May 08, 2007
    second reading...something in this really draws attention. but it could just be my preferences for barbossa...



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  • From ANON - caz on May 05, 2007
    i liked it, and i want more, how's that? :D

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  • From kspence on May 03, 2007
    Bugger me backwards, if you'll excuse the expression, but that just so breath-takingly Barbossa-tastic...he's an interesting fellow but scandalously under-used in fanfics in general - the world needs a lot more well-written stories like this one. The characters were believable as the ones in the films and I liked the interplay between them...especially the development under Barbossa's bad influence of Elizabeth from being awkward and virginal, to manacle-weilding nympho... and at the same time the captain kind of sort of warming to her. All their dialouge was very nicely done too. Many thanks for posting this, I'll eagerly be watching out for a sequel or development, or anything else you write really!
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  • From ANON - Georgie Fain on May 01, 2007
    wow. now, while someone else might find the idea of hector barbossa and elizabeth swann/turner a disgusting or disturbing one.....I actually loved this. hot damn. more barbossa/elizabeth, please!
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