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Reviews for Stop

By : JChat
  • From bloodravyn on October 05, 2011
    omfg!!!!
    this is awesome and hot!
    and you need to update, like now!
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  • From ANON - Gabby on November 20, 2010
    I loved it you did a great. I do wish there were more sweet cuddle moments but then agian Warren is himself. Well keep it up!
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  • From Madamdragon on August 12, 2010
    i really hope theres more to come
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  • From ANON - filiasan on August 11, 2010
    Two days ago, I read this fic in its entirety. Yesterday, I reread it. And now, I'm going to read it again. Oh yeah, I think I might like it.
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  • From ANON - Addiena_Saffir on June 28, 2010
    This story has just melted my brain..ack
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  • From ANON - Addiena_Saffir on June 28, 2010
    I'm ordering a nice shiny brand spanking new pedestal for you. Because you are one sexxy genius loved this!!
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  • From ANON - Addiena_Saffir on June 28, 2010
    Holy Smokes!!! That was one of the hottest stories i've ever read. EVER you are way talented. jesus i need a cold shower now.
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  • From ANON - Sancta on March 10, 2010
    I am so happy you posted!!! I loved the new chapter and can't wait for more. I just wish you didn't change the beginning chapters. I had loved the emotion in them, now they just seem as if you were just getting the words out of the way.
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  • From ANON - Niko on July 10, 2009
    -whimpers- OH DEAR GOD PLEASE UPDATE~!

    -whines, throwing a temper tantrum-

    .....

    anyway

    I find now flaws in this story except no plot (not that anyone cares...)

    lol

    If there is a plot, I was too lost to notice lol.

    Keep it up and friggen update man!

    -love Niko.
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  • From ANON - zanshin on May 04, 2009
    Oh, I love this fic! It's awesome, well written, you did the characters well, and the sex scenes were pretty ^_^ I hope you add more chapters soon. I'd love to see more.
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  • From AylaRouge on April 20, 2009
    I just finish rereading this and damn! I miss it and I wold really love it if it was updated, but I'm not going to hold my breathe. I just wanted you to know that there's a fan out there, ready to read whenever ^^
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  • From fairietayle on March 15, 2009
    I like this fic. I like it A LOT.
    It's clear, to the point with a good and strong start and the smut has a reason.
    It's also hot, sensual, strong and powerful. It affected me with such a force that it caused my temperature to rise and shivers to race up and down my spine as I read it.
    The portraying of characters was perfect. I also see Will as the submissive type - he has to be so strong and in control when dealing with the wordl, it's no wonder he would be more than happy to give up the control to someone else while in private. And fire has a habit of being uncontrable, so I'm not sure if Will could control Warren even if he wanted to.
    I also loved all the details, like Warren's bodyheat. It made me want to curl up next to something warm ^-^

    And I'm so in love with this fic that I don't WANT to find any fault in this. But when I'm feeling like being honest to myself I have to admit that the last part, the actual sex, bugs me. I'm conflicted by it. The flying was a little out of the woods for me, some way totally unnecessary, but in a way it also gave something extra to the scene.
    I'm not sure if it's a bonus or a minus, so I think I'm just gonna go blind, close my eyes, and just love this fic.
    Because it's so SHINY and pretty...
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 28, 2009
    The sky sex scene was pure gold.
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  • From Febreezer on November 29, 2008
    PLEASE UPDATE! I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Sancta on July 23, 2008
    happy dance: i never thought you would update. thank you. that was pure bliss!
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