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Reviews for Sandstorm

By : Pilgrim
  • From RavenNolan on July 01, 2007
    Oh, and I like the passion between them. It's really good and pretty well done and believable with the characters. It doesn't seem like sex for purely smutty reasons. It is like what happens in relationships.
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  • From RavenNolan on July 01, 2007
    I'm still around enjoying this story. I still like it. Poor Obi-Wan. lol. Arsha is definitely taking the man on a wild ride. I just hope he wakes up soon and can set her straight, or get rid of her. I kinda like her, but I don't want her to hurt Obi.
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  • From ANON - Judo Chops on May 28, 2007
    Oh, so right about Obi! He's such a cute clueless thing though, isn't he? I just wanna pinch his cheek and then maybe make out with him a little bit...but that's beside the point ;)
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  • From RavenNolan on May 26, 2007
    This was a good chapter. I especially liked the part in which she tapped into Obi's mental conversation with Anakin and his confrontation with her on it. Nicely done. Although, I am curious to know if she was once a padawan herself and who the person was that came in.
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  • From ANON - Judo Chops on May 25, 2007
    Oooooh So he finally realizes something's up...Obi-Wan may be a sexy beast but he sure is kinda slow sometimes...
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  • From ANON - Judo Chops on May 11, 2007
    *Gasp* Wasn't expecting that encounter in the shop.

    I love it! Keep it up hun, it's great so far, and you didn't just jump into a random smut scene, so that's nice :P
    ...though I wouldn't mind a good smut scene with Obi *nudge nudge wink wink*...

    Can't wait for the next chapter!


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  • From ANON - Judo Chops on May 11, 2007
    Oh my gosh...I am so jealous...I don't know what I'd do if I had Obi-Wan (or Ewan ;) ) in my bed...

    Let's just say I'd probably attack him. Lucky for him he's not :P

    Sorry, just loved this part, wanted to comment before I moved to the next chapter.
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  • From RavenNolan on April 29, 2007
    Look forward to finding out more about Arsha. Seems that she has a past that she really would rather escape from depite the act she is putting on for Obi.
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  • From ANON - Mia Kenobi on April 19, 2007
    This is a great story. Keep up the good work!
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  • From RavenNolan on April 10, 2007
    Poor Obi. He really is getting a number pulled on him and can't even see it.
    Keep writing and I'll keep reading. It's getting more interesting with each chapter.
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  • From ANON - Judo Chops on March 28, 2007
    Hey! Thanks for letting me know about this, have been wondering if anyone would ever make a nice Obi-Wan fic :P He just doesn't get enough action around here...

    Anywho, it's really good so far! I'm excited to see when Obi-Wan and Arsha meet! Will be checking back as much as possible to catch the next chapter =D
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