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Reviews for U'sl-kwe

By : prairiefire
  • From ANON - blood shifter on February 06, 2009
    this is a good story. i hope you update it soon.
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  • From ANON - Lina on June 08, 2007
    Wonderful story, I liked how you showed the maternal instincts with the female yautja. I believe many of the predator stories lack that.
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  • From Keen on June 08, 2007
    First thing, PUHLLEEEZE don't hurt the baby.

    Second, how old is she? She seems too crisp in the mind to be suckling. Is it like a 'Grapes of Wrath' thing where you either have breastmilk or nothing for dinner?

    Eitherway, it's all good. I really like that warm n' fuzzy feeling when I read about their bonding. 'S real nice.

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  • From MuseofScrolls on June 06, 2007

    I'm amazed at the almost immediate bond forming between Pa'dax and Phoenix. At least the girl has some relief from punishment and also won't get a collar. But over time that could change. A little ray of hope in the story, Lady Prairie, and very interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on June 01, 2007
    Well, while that was a mild chapter and some good things did happen. I'm guessing that the next ones will be more evil? I'm really interested to see where this goes... =D
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on May 26, 2007
    Ok, I am waiting for the darkness to continue. And waiting for Pheonix to grow up and kick all their asses!!! =)
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  • From Keen on April 27, 2007
    Dtai’ku is out of control. This is shaping up to be so dark and twisted...and I can't get enough. Good deal.
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  • From Shalimar on April 21, 2007
    Your Bad Bloods are so vile they make my stomach hurt. Sadistic Dtai’ku is particularly appalling. Really well done characterizations on them. I'm glad you had Pa'dax noting that Phoenix stank; none of the males has made any attempt at caring for her other than giving her the fruit, so she should be in desperate need of clean pants. However, I am finding Phoenix's thought processes and emotional restraint a tad mature for a two-year-old. I'll be interested to see where you go with this fic.
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  • From MuseofScrolls on April 18, 2007
    Holy smokes, but they are cruel! You really know how to bring about the more sadistic and harsh traits of the Yautja, Prairie. But it's very good. I look forward to the next portion.
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  • From JulieL on April 16, 2007
    Now you know I can't wait to see what happens next, but I'm patient. LOL, I'm a fine one to talk I guess too.
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  • From Keen on March 17, 2007
    It is a dangerous thing to be a mum in a pred fic, they tend to drop like flies. Still it makes for good drama and this is good drama. Te’var’zan is a real piece of work. Can’t wait to read more.
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  • From Malestorm on March 17, 2007
    It is nice to see you posting again ( I know I am one to talk) I find this story very interesting. I wish to know more about the plight of this young girl. Great start bring us more.
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