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Reviews for Deal Breaker

By : Shalimar
  • From PrimitiveScrewhead on May 24, 2007
    “Chak’tou,” he says, pointing at his chest.

    “Gesundheit,” I reply automatically.

    that made me laugh harder than it should have. :D


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  • From pyrodaemon on March 23, 2007
    awwww so...um...not sweet? lol I'm not sure what to say about it because it's not a romance, nor is it horror or action...its um interesting is all I can think of. I hope you continue it and tell me what happens next because I'm very interested in see-er reading the next installment.
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  • From DeathGodDist on February 11, 2007
    I really really love these characters and this story. Kat has her own unique personality and the writing style you use to emote her inner thoughts is just superb. I certainly hope that you will continue to add to this story and keep up such a wonderful pace as you have been.
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  • From Keen on February 09, 2007
    The line about shouting like an American to a foreigner was hilarious! I know exactly what you were talking about (you speak another language too?). Also, I like the inclusion of the Clan mothers. I’ve read on various sites the mums were supposed to be in charge since the males are always away on hunt. It was a nice surprise to see it here put in to a story. Not that it needs to be said, but I really like your writing. It’s swift, to the point, wonderfully twisted and I think I spied a shout to one of my favourite stories/authors. Great job and greater cliff hanger.
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  • From Retribution on February 06, 2007
    shalimar, there will be more to this, right. you wouldn't break an old ladys' heart, would you?
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  • From Nahaujaret on February 06, 2007
    I really enjoyed this fic, just like the last one. I really hope you add another chapter. Please, please update soon.
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  • From myladymystere on February 03, 2007
    I am very glad you continued this- the begining of a great story- keep Kat strong- I love her !!!
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  • From aquamum on February 02, 2007
    I love this story - great HMS - I'm glad they are having a child together - shame she has to go back to earth - but I think she might like to meet that other female ooman who lives amongst them.

    This is one of the better written stories on this site - congrats. !!!!!!!
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  • From Retribution on February 01, 2007
    bravo to this story i most say that it is, well, just beautiful.
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  • From Rosei on February 01, 2007
    Great beginning. Very rich. Thanks!
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