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Reviews for In The Nick Of Time

By : LaurenGraceJurious
  • From oliversangel on December 28, 2008
    *blinks* I haven't read your reviews yet, but in your responses I remember reading something about someone's brains flopping out of their heads...Well, I came completely appart, melted into a puddle if you will. ^.^ Luckily my water heater is broken, so we have a rather large supply of cold water, but I admit to having to take a break between CH 13 and 14, to er...*blushes* jumpmy hubby. He thanks you by the way. ^.^ I felt as though I were watching this as a movie. Honestly. And someone once paid me the same compliment, and I was on cloud 11 for about a week. The imagry you create, is beautiful. You are funny. I sprayed soda on my screen twice. Completely unprepared for what I read both times. "You will always remember this day as the day you almost fucked Captain Jack Sparrow." And this one...*giggles* *high pitched cockney* "Oh Jack, drag yer nuts over me guts..." Both times my hubby looked at me as though I were insane. I can't blame him though....LOL. I loved the "primordial enchantment" line, that was beautiful. I loved the bed he set up for her, that was always a fantasy of mine...a huge bed on the beach, breeze, white linen curtains, and the water lapping about the posts. Oh and who wouldn't love to have a gold replica of Jack's cock? I know I would. *grins* I love the way you write Jack...in love, sweet, but not too terribly mushy, always in character, always witty. *sigh* This was a masterpiece, and handsdown...no lie...the best Jack/Lizzie action I have ever read. Although I have to admit, I am not too fond of her. Who would honestly choose Will over Jack? I rather though Will looked a bit like a greasy rat, complete with greasy rat mustache, and Jack was more muscular, more manly...more everything than Will. The only time I found him attractive in the movies, was when he captained the Flying Dutchman. Maybe it was the black clothes, and his hair being tied back? I dunno. Anywho..that reminds me of a hilarious parody fic I read. I have no idea where I found it, maybe you have already read it? Jack and Elizabeth were aboard the Pearl, and were locked in a heated embrace, and suddenly, the Dutchman popped up out of the water, next to the Pearl, nearly knocking over Jack and 'Lizbeth. She ran over to the side of the ship, and Will ran up to her, and shouted, "Eight years!!" Lizzie- "I'm counting the days!!" *passionate kiss, tearful goodbyes* *Dutchman disappears* Jack looks mournful, and Lizzie apologizes. Jack says something like, "It's alright, even though you are the only woman for me, I understand that I'm not the only man for you." *Apologetic and passionate kissing* *The Dutchman pops up once more, this time knocking Lizzie and Jack over* Jack this time, runs over to where Will is standing. They share a heated kiss. Jack- "Eight years!" Will- I'm counting the days!" *smiling and waving ensues, before Will disappears once more below the depths of the ocean* Lizzie runs off to Jack's cabin, where she throws Jack's pillow at him, knocking him over then slamming the door shut.LOL Oh man. That was a funny, funny story. Anywho, I think I've read all your stuff. I haven't seen The Procphecy, so I doubt it would make much sense to me. XXOO
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  • From Jacksfavoritewench on May 29, 2008
    Wow, this is a really awesome story! I love it, can't wait for more!

    JackSparrowsWench
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  • From wisenedwonders on September 17, 2007
    Oh! Please update soon! I love this story, I really do! Please please please update soon! Don't give up on this story, it's too good!

    I love the chemistry between Jack and Elizabeth! Thank you for writing!

    Wisend Wonders
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  • From bitsodrama on July 16, 2007
    One of the best Jack/Elizabeth stories I've read. I'm looking forward to reading more. :)
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  • From potcfan on July 13, 2007
    It's been months since your story was updated...I want to know what happens next!! I love your story and want the rest of it. :0(
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  • From freelke on March 12, 2007
    When will you update this story? I really like it and I hope you post another chapter soon. Do you have any other sites with your stories?
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  • From CaptDavyJonesLover on March 05, 2007
    okies i am caught up with this one and i love it....keep it up mate.
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  • From Sparrabeth4ever on February 18, 2007
    Hey :)

    I just wanted to say that this is a fantastic piece of work!

    I found this by accident, but now i'm absolutely hooked, i even had to join this place just so i could review and tell you so. I can't wait for the next chapter, i found myself laughing out loud to all Jack's quirky remarks. I.E "almost fucked Captain Jack Sparrow." i found myself in tears of laughter, seriously though you portray him very well and its absolutely amazing and such a great read.

    You really have Elizabeth set to a 'T'she comes across just as i imagine her to, you'veinspired me to try and write a peice but i doubt i will i could never write like this, its brilliant well done!

    I absolutely love this fic i hope you update soon i really cant wait :D

    Cat xx
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  • From rejerito on February 12, 2007
    *DIES!*
    And that's all I have to say!
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  • From heartJD on February 07, 2007
    opwieurhjwkfhweilu!!!!!!!
    Each time I tell myself that it CAN'T be better than the last chapter. But you surprised me once again.
    Best fucking fellatio scene I ever read (déjà vu... :P)!!! More on Tasty Pirates.
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  • From DesiringPirates on February 06, 2007
    ...hmmph. It's not like they actually built sandcastles.
    And that was great!! Man, Lizzie has an imagination. And I can picture Jack after what she did, just staring up at the sky, his face blank. I'd begin to worry about him!!
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  • From unknownsoldier on February 02, 2007
    After reading that i need a nap! BRAVO!!! Standing ovation even!!!*bows down in the 'we are not worthy style'* AMAZING!!!
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  • From DesiringPirates on February 02, 2007
    *sigh*
    That was perfect, and realistic. I loved it.

    *sigh* ... my brain has turned off, that was just romantic...
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  • From unknownsoldier on February 01, 2007
    PLEASE TELL ME IM NOT MISSING CHAPTER 13 YOU COULDN'T HAVE POSSIBLY STOPPED THERE!!!!!!!!!
    ACKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK *thud*
    sometime later....
    Ok...breathing has returned to a steady rate and im pretty sure i can see straight too. Thats a good sign. Now to try walking again. Baby steps...baby steps.




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  • From rejerito on February 01, 2007
    HOW DARE YOU STOP NOW????!?!?!??!?!?!?!!!!!!! YOU EVIL WOMAN!!!!!!
    OMG!!! I don't think I can handle the rest of the wedding night! My brain is already in non-functional state!!
    IT'S YOUR OBLIGATION TO END OUR AGONY!!!!
    We want THE ACT!!!!!
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