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By : industrialmidnight
  • From Goblingirlsarah on January 08, 2024

    Fuck! I know who that baby killing merc piece of trash is! I'm Imagining a slow and painfully torturous death for him...hope to see this story completed someday, as it is really good!


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  • From Sheshe0013 on August 10, 2017

    I really like this story a lot. I wish you would continue it. I really enjoy your writing 


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  • From ANON - MonaTheGreat on February 17, 2016
    You write so wonderfully. I loved the tension in the beginning and your sex scenes are downright hot. You are amazing!
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  • From bloodravyn on October 15, 2009
    OMFG!
    IS THERE MORE TO THIS?!
    THIS IS INCREDIBLE, AWESOME, WONDERFUL, SEXY, SAD AND SO MUCH MORE...ALL ROLLED INTO ONE BIG HAPPINESS FOR ME TO READ!!!
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  • From MzBailynn on June 30, 2009
    I really like this story. I've read it several times and only now decided to register...and just to review. I love your character and I loved how Riddicky, Richard B. really was. So great job.
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  • From mangamaniac on June 27, 2008
    Just wanted to tell you how impressed I was by this fan fic. I really love how you stayed true to Riddick's character. You have a wonderful imagination to be able to make this story fit seemlessly into the movies and give it so much background info. Great job!
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  • From speachestx on May 10, 2008
    Please!!!!! For anything come back and update I'm begging you please!!!!!!
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  • From Lovergal on February 09, 2008
    Wow, those were some hot-as-heck love scenes you've crafted. You've really got Riddick's voice there. Really super!
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  • From alenanoemi on October 16, 2007
    Thank you for not entirely abandoning this story. Still, I feel that I have to say this: I'm not trying to be cruel or unfair, but I don't understand why the new chapters are taking so long to put up. I remember that you mentioned something about losing the story or such... but this is written so close to the original that I think you found a copy somewhere. Now, you're at the same point as you were before... where's the new stuff? I realize that there are new readers out there, but I (as an older fan) am disappointed when I realize that you've updated with old material. Please continue the story!
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  • From LaydeRogue on September 18, 2007
    This story is totally amazing. I use to be a fan fic junkie for a few years under another ship. But i just lost my passion for reading ANYTHING at all. This story has offically brought me back. I would love to see more of this story very soon. Your descriptions and character details as so precise. I loved the scene where they both marked each other. It was very reminesent of Underworld with the entire blood memory thing. However, when you wrote it, the scenes where so much more visual than anything I've seen in any movie. Thank you for igniting my passion for fan fic again. Please write more soon.
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  • From amaranthaseven on August 26, 2007
    Wow! Quite an emotional chapter as well as an action-packed one! She's had a really tough life. I hope she and Riddick can provide some stability and safety for each other, because that seems to be a rare thing for him, too. I'm not surprised that they have some sort of destiny together. Very interesting plot-wise- and continues to be very hot and sexy, too!
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  • From amaranthaseven on August 03, 2007
    Just an add-on from my previous: I'm not sure I effectively said what i was trying to say, which is, that I assume the parallels of her life with Riddick's are intentional on your part, and not a coincidence. When I reread what I posted, it came across to me as possibly sounding like criticism, but I actually meant the reverse! I assume you're hinting at a deeper connection than just lust. I'm intrigued.
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  • From amaranthaseven on August 03, 2007
    Hot stuff! I like seeing Riddick with an equally tough and passionate woman! obviously, they have some strange connection- same subspecies of Homo Sapiens, perhaps? The coincidence about being found as an infant in a dumpster (I believe that was Riddick as well) seems a little too, well, coincidental. Very sexy stuff between them. Hope you continue soon!
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  • From Keen on July 13, 2007
    OH MY GAWD!

    I am SO glad that you are back and posting.

    Your work is so intense and enthralling and arousing. You have a serious and beautiful gift for writing. Please don’t leave again!

    -Cam
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  • From CLTexas84 on July 11, 2007
    im sorry you havent gotten any reviews but i really love your story and have checked it everyday for updates....more please!!!!!
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