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Reviews for The Inner Beast

By : LaurenGraceJurious
  • From AlwayzWritingCS on February 05, 2020

    I loved, loved, loved reading this story. My only complaint was your use of technical terms for parts of the body.


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  • From testo_van_rein on July 10, 2019

    Hi, Grace Lee!

    I’ve just read this story of yours and I wanna translate it into Russian if you mind.

    This story is really amazing and it inspired me so much so now I’m eager to translate it and post on the site ficbook for Russian readers.

     I want more people to read this story. But I want you to give me your official permission because I can’t translate it and post on the site ficbook without your official permission. I swear I’d preserve your authorship. I’ll send you a link to my translation.

    Sincerely,

    Saaya.


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  • From dschinny on December 10, 2014
    I totally love this story and enjoy returning to it around halloween!
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  • From ANON - FaerieInCombatBoots on October 25, 2014
    This has to be one of my favorite stories of all time. The hot sex scenes, the passionate love, the tragic end. And you were right, it did make me love the Hessian. I can't watch the movie anymore without thinking of this story.
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  • From ANON - Nee Saoirse on September 15, 2014
    Very beautifully written. I adore The Hessian and pretend I'm his wife. That's why I don't date. hahahahahahahhahaha
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  • From ANON - things_and_stuff on March 19, 2013
    Ok I was not expecting something that good..I mean I'm not found of OCs, but Cloella is just that great. And the Hessian, I can't even tell; the joy to picture that hot colussus wandering around and making fiercely love to a pretty and caring you woman is beyond words. It all fits perfectly with the initial story, make it deeper and the death of the Hessian even more tragic. It's rare to read someting that weel written ant that moving on adult fanfiction. Your story could've had 40 chapters it would have been a pleasure to read each one them and it still wouldn't be enough of these two to satisfy my love for the pairing you've created!
    Headcanon accepted! When I 'll have the time, I'll try to make fanart of this fanfic, if you don't mind xD
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  • From ANON - MareBear on February 10, 2013
    This story is really amazing, and very well written. Good job, two thumbs up.
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  • From ANON - salencea on August 24, 2012
    have you ever read the highway man.

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  • From ravienco on July 15, 2010
    I have fallen in love with this story. So much that I cried at the ending!

    This caputed my heart, a story that should repulse people instead shows love can come in many forms.

    Thank you so much for writing this story and sharing it. I've bookmarked the page so I can read it again.
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  • From Giselle08 on June 28, 2010
    This is utterly the most amazing fan fic I have ever read BRAVO, you did an amazing job, Sleepy hollow has always been my favorite story, and the horseman my favorite character, I also love how you employed the poem the highwayman at the end, for it is also one of my favorites and they do fit together so wonderfully, you are an amazing writer and I have no qualms in telling you that I cried at the end of this fan fic. I would definitly pay money to have it, if it were for sell I would be the first in line to own it. You can bet I will enjoy reading it several more times. Thank you so much for such an amazing piece of literature.
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  • From CausticRewind on March 01, 2009
    It's been months and months and months since I've even been on this site, either to post or read, unless I'm looking for a specific fiction that's been lost from my collection. That being said, I'd like you to know that the only reason for my returning to this site during the past six weeks has been to read and reread this fine piece of fiction. I stumbled into the Sleepy Hollow category from sheer idle wonder, curious as to whether anyone with any talent had ever gotten around to writing a truly fine story based on the movie. Imagine my awe when I found a beautiful gem of a piece devoted to the development of my absolutely favorite character (both in and outside of the movie) - the Headless Horseman. I adore your evocative use of language, especially between the sheets with the Hessian and Cloella.

    The use of an OC is usually something I refuse to put up with, and yet I fell desperately in love with such a sweet, charming, bashful, yet at the very same time, brazen and rawly sexual girl as Cloella. At times I simply wanted to steal her away from our lovely Hessian. And oh dear. The Horseman himself. I can't ever help but compare him to my fiance, all powerful muscles and fiery eyes and large.... appetite. ;] It quite helps, as he's currently halfway across the world, and as you very well must know, a girl gets lonely!

    And just so you know how much I love this story... you ought to know that if you were ever to put this marvelous marriage of love, power, and lust into paper form, my copy would be dog-eared and well-worn within a week. Kudos!

    ~CR
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  • From Morgan5318 on February 14, 2009
    One word: WOW. This was an incredibly well-written story. I've long been a fan of The Hessian, and your story will give me dreams for many nights to come. I love the romance of the tale. Truly a new "Legend of Sleepy Hollow" has been written!

    Thank you for a wonderful read!

    Best,
    Morgan
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  • From oliversangel on December 20, 2008
    Oh wow. That was wonderful. You certainly lived up to your promise, and made me love The Hessian. Oh that was such a sad story, but a beautiful one. Thank you for sharing it with us. You are a phenomenal writer. XXOO
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  • From MissAmazing on November 10, 2008
    Wow! I loved this story! I read your Hellboy story too and I defintetly think you should continue. I just wish I coud read more about the Hessian and Cloella!
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  • From dschinny on November 10, 2008
    Beautifully written fairytale, hut stuff - Thanks for sharing!
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