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Reviews for The Deal

By : Shalimar
  • From Wolly on June 14, 2016
    Dear Shalimar ,
    I really loved your fanfiction !
    And I love this fandom too ...
    I would like , if you 'll give me your permission , to translate THE DEAL ( and the others oneshot of this series) in italian , my mother language .

    We have very few italian stories of AVP , and I would like that Also other fans - who do not understand english very well - are be able to read your work.

    I hope and wait for your reply , you can contact me at my email adress valeria.cristaldi@live.it ^ _ ^
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  • From kokoronoitami on March 10, 2008
    F****** GREAT stuff... Oh, I am SO delighted that I was recommended this..... What beautiful description and characterization...
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  • From LadyShiva on December 19, 2007
    Incredible story! Hot, scary, sexy. The perfect package. Going quick to read the sequel!
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  • From ANON - Adara of Giovanni on January 18, 2007
    Hands down; I LOVE THIS!

    I am completely taken by it Shalimar. I love it, love it, LOVE IT. I cannot wait for your next chapter. I will be waiting EVER so patiently.


    Adara G.
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  • From ANON - Death God Dist on January 13, 2007
    Heh, I liked this story, it was different but still well written. I do hope that you will choose to continue it down the road as I see some great potential here.
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  • From ANON - Muse of Scrolls on January 08, 2007
    Wow...now that's a "military" story. It's so well-written, and I loved some of the narrator's quips. Though she's about to endure something that might not be pleasant (yeah, right), she's still able to make humorous thoughts. And I'm glad he came back for her; I was kind of hoping for something like that in the end. But actually, is this just a one-shot or are you going to continue? It could work either way. Really enjoyed the story, and thank you for sharing.
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  • From Keen on January 06, 2007
    Tight work! This was thoroughly enjoyable! The way you tell a story has a way of just grabbing you and keeping you firmly in place. Love the shout out to J.A. by the way. Big up to mi yard peoples!

    Tell me is this a ‘one-shot’? I only ask because it ended with that kind of feel.

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  • From ANON - Shyann on January 04, 2007
    Please post more soon..
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  • From ANON - myladymystere on December 30, 2006
    whoo-hoo, that's a hot and steamy story !!!!! totally loved it !!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kira on December 29, 2006
    you have to write more!!
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  • From ANON - Nahau on December 29, 2006
    I really like this fic. I was wondering if you're going to make a second chapter. I think that would be really nice. You're a good wroter and I appreciate the way you give insite to what the main character is thinking.
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  • From ANON - aquamum on December 24, 2006
    Excellent first chapter - I hope you continue this story......
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  • From Shalimar on December 23, 2006
    Anon number 1, I'm not sure what you were looking for, but I guess this fic wasn't it. Anon number 2, thank you, thank you! Sara, AntiDolorico, and chancelor22, love you guys, but you already know that! And, wow, Baxter, I'm impressed. You kinda like it even. If it helps you out any, the only reason the Predator takes the woman is that he thinks it's a waste to leave her locked up in that place; he's got better uses for her. That, incidentally, is the kind of thought your lizard brain has. And what's wrong with vagina? I'm real fond of mine! ;-)
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  • From AntiDolorifico on December 23, 2006
    A true, lecherous joy to read, chérie, as always... =)
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  • From ANON - Baxter9696 on December 23, 2006
    *breaths sigh of relief* originality… of sorts. the beginning is like another story on this site and although hes a raping and woman beating pred, he still plays savior saving the damsel-but it’s forgivable since its so entertaining. usually the pred is so docile, gentle and *nutered* at the sight of his ooman lead its nice to see one that is a real bastard.

    do me the favor of never writing ‘vagina’ again and tell me what a ‘lizard brain’ is.

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