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Reviews for Twisted Views

By : Pilgrim
  • From Kimmie on February 23, 2007
    Omg omg omg. what the hell! This story is getting crazy! But dont worry its a good crazy. Things i didnt think would happen are happening! Gah gotta finish the story right now!
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  • From Pilgrim on February 23, 2007
    Wow, I've never heard that song before! You're right, it does fit her really well! :)

    Thanks for all the comments so far :D, sorry I took so long to reply! It's been hectic at my end, far too many things going on! Anyway, I'm glad you like Oria because I just adore her lol! She's so flawed and yet just so... perfect at the same time... I can't really explain it lol.

    Anyway, keep reviewing! All reviews are highly appreciated and new reviewers are always welcome! :D

    Have fun with the following chapters and I look forward to hearing what you think!

    Pilgrim x
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  • From Kimmie on February 23, 2007
    I just thought of the perfect song that suits Oria. Mistaken Identity by Delta Goodrem. I heard it the other day and the first thing i thought of was our lovely Oria. Think about it and see if you understand where im coming from
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  • From ANON - Lady Linwe on February 22, 2007
    Sorry about not reviewing much. I have left a couple before this but i get too wrapped up in the story to review and keep reading before i realise what i have done. Any way you are doing brilliantly. I dont know if you still read these coz there are newer stories up but i will keep reading and let you know along the way what i think and have a full spurt at the end.

    To summarise: Good job, keep going, love Oria.

    Ok i know i hadnt said anything about Oria but i had to add that
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  • From Pilgrim on January 29, 2007
    Hi lileem,

    Sorry I took so long to reply, I've been ill.

    Thank you so much for your review! I'm really flattered! Your English is a LOT better than my German!

    I'd love for you to review again for my stories if you get time. Thank you so much!

    Pilgrim x
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  • From ANON - lileem on January 26, 2007
    hi,
    i'm from germany. in the last days i'm occupied with reading your story and I must say when they had filmed your story in stad of the original i think the success had benn even graeter. what i have doubt bevor reading your story. how long did you write on this? im impresst of the charcterisation of oria. i hope my english is not to bad!
    but now i must read further!
    greetings and bows :-)
    lileem
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  • From ANON - Michelle on January 14, 2007
    Nice last chapter of this series of Oria and Jack. The title was fitting. Trust? Will Jack be able to Trust Oria??? Now that Jack is more aware of her obligation to Davey will Oria be able to trust Jack. Nice story and I am off to read the next installment.
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  • From Pilgrim on January 12, 2007
    Hey stipje,

    I'm going to explain the whole 'heart can only save one' issue in the next part. Bear with me :) It's one of those questions I was leaving for the next part and I swear to you it WILL be answered :D no worries

    Pilgrim x
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  • From ANON - mar1966 on January 11, 2007
    Once again I am awed by your writing talent!

    I can't wait for the next installment!

    Hurry!
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  • From ANON - michelle on January 10, 2007
    I thought the man that wrapped his coat around Oria was Jack. But now I know for sure. Awe, it's sooo sweet. I knew he couldn't leave without her. He's got it bad!!! lol So the heart will only save one?! Too bad!! Now that Jack is aware of her situation and duty obligations to Davey, he will be more careful and perhaps find a way to save them both??? He is the sly and clever one you know. Well at least I can only hope things turn out with a happy ending. But in the mean time more intersting twist and turns to come. Keep them coming!!!
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  • From ANON - stipje on January 10, 2007
    Had a bit of catching up to do!

    But... Why can the heart 'rescue' only one of them?
    (It may be obvious, but I just got outa bed so my mind's
    a bit foggy ;) )

    Silly James, he just doesn't get it.
    I so hope there'll be happy ending to this =D
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  • From ANON - michelle on January 09, 2007
    Thanks for posting two chapters, chapter 21 and 22. They were great. I wonder how the Commodore will free himself from the tree and how he is going to handle the new knowledge of our dear Oria's healing powers. I felt so sad for Jack when Oria said it was all just an 'Act.' Poor Jack. He loves Oria just as she does him. Love is blind. But like Jack said Oria cannot be trusted...I'm curious as to how Oria knew Jack would seek refuge with that particular whore??? I wonder what Jack is going to do now. This was very hard for Jack having to dismiss Oria from her duty, but completely understandable. Some unanswered questions finally answered and I cannot wait for chapter 23 to find out more. Hopefully more questions will be answered in the next posting. :)
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  • From ANON - stipje on January 08, 2007
    Never mind, I got the chapters kinda mixed up
    (the one with the added paragraphs) ;)

    Okay... She's going to trick Jack and Davey.
    What on earth does she want?

    Chapter 23 you say? *bounces in anticipation*
    Jack's a fool... How can he not see she loves him?
    She can't even look him in the eyes and tell him.
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  • From ANON - Michelle on January 08, 2007
    Yay two more chapters...I love it when you don't have to wait months for an update. The story stays fresh in your head and the anticipation is satisfied. Please keep them coming regulary and your readers will be very happy!!! I loved chapter 19 and 20. It is sooo obvious that Oria and Jack love each other but with the circumstances bestowed upon Oria it makes a relationship impossible. It's soo sad. Oria deserves to be happy. She's suffered so much in her life...But I know Oria has a plan and I cannot wait to find out just what she has in store for Davey and our beloved Jack. She has been so clever up to this point and I know it is just the beginning. Please post soon. *hoping*
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  • From ANON - mar1966 on January 07, 2007
    Wow, you were busy writing your little heart out while I was off goofing around!

    This story is becoming rather heart wrenching and I love it!!

    Keep up the good work!


    *waves to other reviewers* Hi, glad to see I'm no longer alone!
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