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Reviews for A little side story

By : Suryallee7104
  • From ANON - smashthemirror on November 26, 2006
    oh this is a happy night! A completed story, new chapter on the other, and a new one shot!

    This was very cute, and sweet...I love the discussion between Paul and Marco...I have to say, you write an adorable paul, fiend that he is, heh. We seem to have similar opinions on him and I love it for the sheer fact that I can read that sort of paul without having to write it myself ;) You do a great sensitive Paul, and at the same time you don't compromise him, which I greatly appreciate. I hate to see any of the boys softened up to the point where they're out of character mushballs, but it specially kills me when it's him. You got it just right, aw, I feel for him.

    I have to admit I was laughing like an idiot at the descriptions of those two going through the whore district of santa carla...though you're far nicer than I ever was!

    /Love/ the ending. I'm very big on folktales and symbolism, so seeing fate played out like that nearly made me cheer. Dare I ask if this is going to lead towards a Paul story? (bats her eyes and prepares to get down on her knees to beg)

    See, with as much as you write, I'll never have to lift a finger to the keyboard again! (runs like hell) Kidding, I'm kidding.

    Anyway, great fic!
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