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Reviews for A Swann's Sparrow

By : Nefaeri
  • From UndeadMonkey on March 14, 2007
    New reader aboard here! Just read your chapter and it was amazingly touching. It made my eyes water when Lizzie couldnt remember who she was, and it hurt so much feeling Jacks grief. Awesome story, cant wait to here the rest
    chelsea x
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  • From ANON - Wickedswanz on November 22, 2006
    This story is so wonderful so far, please continue.
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  • From ANON - howlongmustiwait on November 13, 2006
    Yes, yes, yes PLEASE continue! I'm hoping you're able to update quickly. They have to find her and FAST - I just can't bear to see Jack like this!
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  • From ANON - elovesjsparrow on November 11, 2006
    that was very nice.... Will getting Jack to finally breakdown and let out his grief, at the expense of his own admission to himself that Elizabeth loves Jack, not him, was very touching... I can't wait to see what happens.
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  • From DesiringPirates on November 11, 2006
    Few things, luv, and i only say this cause I care for you.
    ONE: change the pictures ro engravings. There were no cameras back then.
    TWO: I love angsty Jack, but... he doesn't seem like... Jack.
    Keep writing, though!
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  • From ANON - howlongmustiwait on November 05, 2006
    continue quickly! I'm so glad Lizzie's not really gone - I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From DesiringPirates on November 04, 2006
    Oooh this is much better! I lurves it! Update soon, hon!
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  • From ANON - howlongmustiwait on November 03, 2006
    OMG - so sad! You must update soon - I can't wait to find out what happens. Really good start to the story!
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  • From ANON - THE GREATEST on November 03, 2006
    Jeez, Jer you talk alot. And your chapters should be bigger.

    Oh, word of advice? NEVER post a rant in your A/N. Especially one that BASHES READERS. 'Cause, even I, after reading that, didn't want to read anymore. Maybe you should apologize...
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  • From ANON - elovesjsparrow on October 31, 2006
    This is interesting.... i am liking it so far.. Hope to see more.
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  • From DesiringPirates on October 30, 2006
    NO! Don't review! Reviewing is SINNING!
    Just kidding.
    You BETTER post soon, or I am coming home and kicking your ass. For a minute there, I thought Lizzie was blind, but then I read she was blindFOLDED. You know what I did- I went "Oooohhh!" and smiled.
    UPDATE! Or I will kill you... again!
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  • From ANON - DesiringPirates on October 30, 2006
    NICE!
    ...Your still going down, though. My chapter is at the betas.

    But still, great job! Update soon- I want to find out if Lizzie survived!
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  • From ANON - Madamx on October 29, 2006
    I love it! Very captivating, please continue soon!
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  • From ANON - Wickedswanz on October 29, 2006
    This story has great potential! I can't wait to read more
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