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Reviews for Taming A Dragon

By : Pilgrim
  • From ANON - mar1966 on October 30, 2006
    It's over? Noooooooooo!!

    I read part one and I'll read part 3 as well!

    Better write a part four so I can read that too!
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  • From ANON - Kaylee on October 30, 2006
    I've read both of these stories and they are great. I'll review each of them separately. I like how you have expanded on the "facts" that have come out about Jack's past all while incorpating Oria into the stories. You did a good job of not presenting the Jack we have today, but a Jack who is "naive" enough to be the victim of a mutiny.

    Oria is a likeable enough character, and I applaud the fact that you managed to avoid making her a Mary-Sue. She is a very complex, and fleshed-out character who has managed to keep my interest. My only quibble is pretty minor...I've always liked the idea of Jack becoming "Jack" along the way and that each of his accoutrements meant something to him. It was a little disappointing to see Oria add his bandana and beads during a makeover along with fake stories for each. However, I really liked seeing how he sacked Nassau without a shot. I can't wait to see the continuation of this story.....
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  • From ANON - dugadugabowbow on October 29, 2006
    NO! post now!!! *gasp* I have to know!
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  • From ANON - mar1966 on October 29, 2006
    How much more cliffhangery can it get!

    You've got me on the edge of my seat now!

    Ah, the sweet torment...
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  • From ANON - mar1966 on October 29, 2006
    Once again, excellent!

    More please!!
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  • From ANON - mar1966 on October 28, 2006
    This is such an exciting, action-y story!

    These cannibals are killing me!!

    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - mar1966 on October 28, 2006
    Not a cliffhanger!!

    What's on the other side of that door????

    I can't wait to find out.

    This is a great story!
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  • From ANON - mar1966 on October 25, 2006
    Appalling?? No way, that was HOT!

    I wish my 1st time was about as 100th as good as that!

    You're doing great!!

    Keep it coming!!
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  • From ANON - Dugadugabowbow on October 25, 2006
    Wow...I'm loving this story so much! And I love how quickly you review, thankyou for that!! LOL. Good luck with the next chapter...I'm sure it will be brilliant!
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  • From ANON - mar1966 on October 24, 2006
    I think you're doing great all on your own!

    Now stop praising me and making me blush!


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  • From ANON - Michiru Kaiou on October 24, 2006
    Hi there! I just finished reading everything you've posted so far and I started this morning... I've had a busy day, not! haha, anyways, I'm truly surprised that you have so few hits on your story. It's very good. The plot and action scenes and characterization are all very good. I'm really enjoying it. I don't usually leave long reviews, but you seem as if you'd really like one :)

    The only thing I want to comment on is the dialogue. What the characters are saying to each other is fine. What I mean is the structure of your paragraphs. I think that it could be formatted differently so that it is easier to understand what character is speaking. I don't know if you have anyone proof-reading this for you... or if you take any writing classes. Anyways, maybe even spacing out the dialogue would help.

    I can't wait for an update :) I can't seem to find enough GOOD POTC fics!!
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  • From ANON - Dugadugabowbow on October 24, 2006
    This is an interesting, well written story. Very original :). Can't wait for your next update!
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  • From ANON - mar1966 on October 23, 2006
    No one has reviewed!!??

    I love this story! I can't wait to see if Jack can tame the wild Oria.

    Please, please give me more!
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