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Reviews for Thar She Blows

By : Laurie
  • From ANON - LKraemer on October 14, 2006
    Hi Draylon,

    Thank you so very much for your compliments, :-)

    I just came up with the title off the top of my head hehehe

    Thanks again :-)
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  • From ANON - draylon on October 13, 2006
    Apologies, since I feel compelled to write a review although I have not actually read this story yet (based on the other one though, I'm sure it'll be grand). But I needed to comment....this has to be the best title for a story about oral sex and pirates ever. Brilliant.
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  • From ANON - LKraemer on October 10, 2006
    Heh heh I had originally posted my fanfiction on another website where I had to bleet out certain words. LOL I forgot to post dick and cock, etc words written out in full before I posted here. hee hee
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  • From ANON - LKraemer on October 10, 2006
    Thanks for your compliment.

    I wrote the story for a woman whose name is Donna. My name is Lori.

    She saw my Nip/Tuck fan fiction that I have posted here on the TV shows fan fic site thread.

    She loved my style of writing so she asked me if I would write Pirates of the Caribbean fan fiction for her and include her in it. She loves Johnny Depp.

    I love Johnny Depp from his 21 Jump Street days, many years ago. Of course, I loved him in Pirates also. I actually enjoyed Dead Man's Chest better than the original.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 07, 2006
    Hmmm. Just some constructive criticism. Savvy balls? C***. You're story has the appropriate rating, don't be ashamed to type out cock.

    If you're going to have a one-shot make sure to add detail. Lots and lots of sexual detail.

    Great spelling and grammar though.
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